Anywhooo, so I think the fact that you put Harry Potter in there just got me really really excited. Ngl. Good move ;) But this was soooooooooooooo cute. I am a huge sucker for the best-friends-falling-in-love ordeal.
EXCEPT THAT ENDING. Gurl, I wanted to see Mattie and Garrett end up together. You left it where the reader can assume their own ending and well, my ending is that they end together and Savannah just goes away because for some reason, I feel like she's like a hidden bitch. Like she's hiding it inside....
I showed my appreciation for her by shaving. This line made me lol.
There's a couple of grammar mistakes, but just typos. So nothing too bad or distracting.
Oh my gosh, I really love this story. I felt so bad for Mattie, she seems perfect for Garrett! This was just such a perfect story. And a prefect song to use for inspiration. I really loved reading this!
Anywhooo, so I think the fact that you put Harry Potter in there just got me really really excited. Ngl. Good move ;)
But this was soooooooooooooo cute. I am a huge sucker for the best-friends-falling-in-love ordeal.
EXCEPT THAT ENDING. Gurl, I wanted to see Mattie and Garrett end up together. You left it where the reader can assume their own ending and well, my ending is that they end together and Savannah just goes away because for some reason, I feel like she's like a hidden bitch. Like she's hiding it inside....
I showed my appreciation for her by shaving. This line made me lol.
There's a couple of grammar mistakes, but just typos. So nothing too bad or distracting.
ALL IN ALL, THIS WAS WONDERFUL :)