Why the fuck has this gotten so little attention?!?!?! People are so stupid! I'm glad that re-reading the prequel make me notice this, because as you could tell, I loved the prequel, and I think it's amazing you went on with the story, because there were still so many unread pages to everything that was going on. So thank you for this. I repeat, this deserves more commenteeerrs!
I liked that it was so different to the prequel. Like..the prequel was so adventurous and dirty, and now this all dramatic and sad; and still it fit together so perfectly!
I must admit, I kind of liked Brian and Emi together in the story before. I loved Brian's character there. And because of this, I didn't really have as much sympathy for Johnny right away, as I maybe should have had! I was kind of just reading as he was drunken- and angrily throwing her stuff out. But it didn't take long for me to develop more sympathy. I think what brought out the most emotions with this were the little flashbacks. I LOVED the one that explained how they had met, that was so sweet. And I loved Johnny being such a sassy little shit in it, too. It's (sadly) not really the picture I have of him anyway! But I don't think I'm the only one. What got to me the most was the scene about how they first told each other 'I love you' IT MADE ME SO FUCKING SAD, REALLY. And then I was just feeling like shit for Johnny because of what had happened to him! Especially as soon as Brian showed up at the restaurant and talked to Johnny in such way, i fucking hated his guts. As I said, at first I had liked him, but that just vanished into thin air! Fuck you, Brian. It's really nice to read an awesome sad story like this from time to time, even though I often don't stumble upon them intentionally. I always seem to find them when I'm in the right mood for them, though. I think you did an amazing work with this, showing how great you are at pulling the reader into this and to feel the actual pain this one shot contains. It's one thing telling a story well, but making the reader get into it and like really...yeah, just feel it, too, that's a great fucking job, honey!
Now here's a little hug for Johnny And here's a little BIRDIE for Brian's sad fucking try to apologize:
Why the fuck has this gotten so little attention?!?!?!
People are so stupid! I'm glad that re-reading the prequel make me notice this, because as you could tell, I loved the prequel, and I think it's amazing you went on with the story, because there were still so many unread pages to everything that was going on. So thank you for this.
I repeat, this deserves more commenteeerrs!
I liked that it was so different to the prequel. Like..the prequel was so adventurous and dirty, and now this all dramatic and sad; and still it fit together so perfectly!
I must admit, I kind of liked Brian and Emi together in the story before. I loved Brian's character there.
And because of this, I didn't really have as much sympathy for Johnny right away, as I maybe should have had! I was kind of just reading as he was drunken- and angrily throwing her stuff out. But it didn't take long for me to develop more sympathy.
I think what brought out the most emotions with this were the little flashbacks. I LOVED the one that explained how they had met, that was so sweet. And I loved Johnny being such a sassy little shit in it, too. It's (sadly) not really the picture I have of him anyway! But I don't think I'm the only one. What got to me the most was the scene about how they first told each other 'I love you'
It's really nice to read an awesome sad story like this from time to time, even though I often don't stumble upon them intentionally. I always seem to find them when I'm in the right mood for them, though.
I think you did an amazing work with this, showing how great you are at pulling the reader into this and to feel the actual pain this one shot contains. It's one thing telling a story well, but making the reader get into it and like really...yeah, just feel it, too, that's a great fucking job, honey!
Now here's a little hug for Johnny
And here's a little BIRDIE for Brian's sad fucking try to apologize: