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  • Bandlover493

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    So, I've never actually seen NCIS, so I don't know if that puts me at a disadvantage or not, but I really enjoyed the story. I felt thAt all the characters were very much alive and very relatable. In the part where Natalie was very giddy about her date, it felt like I was in her place. The only thing I see happening that I'm a little cautious about is that it's moving so quickly. They've only had one date and he seems to think he loves her. But besides that, I was really a fan and I plan to keep on reading.
    June 14th, 2016 at 04:02pm
  • JickNonas

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    You know it took me just a little to get connected to the characters, but after a few chapters it was easy to connect! I''m not really into NCIS but your story has a lot of potential and you're a very good writer! Keep updating! I see this story going great places! Good job!!!!! -destiny
    December 18th, 2015 at 06:37am
  • At_deaths_door

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    I believe this story has a lot of potential and i like the style of writing. Very good!
    March 26th, 2014 at 04:55pm
  • nighttchanges

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    Well, comment swap gave me this story and I see that you haven't updated it in a while. Maybe my comment will motivate you so you could update! This is different from what I've ever read before And let me tell you, it's an interesting read. I also love how it's not a one direction story. I love one direction, but it's time for a change, you know? But I'm glad they gave me this story and I like your writing style. I've read all of the chapters you have posted, which is why it took me forever to read. I'm a slow reader D: But it's a good story and I love it so far. I hope you update soon. I'm excited for what you have in stores for the future chapters!
    March 17th, 2014 at 03:49pm
  • sashabear3129

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    *comment swap* so not gonna lie not a big ncis only watched it a few times here and there. However its a good thing I have cause I have feel for each character. Ive much enjoyed this story. love the back ground very simple yet pleasing. And I like how ur showing a different side of tony only few grammar errors here and there. but all in all this story is diff on the right track and has great potential. Mr. Green
    July 23rd, 2013 at 11:36am
  • German13

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    First off, I LOVE NCIS!! So this was a great story to read!! I read up to chapter 3 or 4 I think, I might continue to read it later! I think your writing style is good, and there was only a few minor grammer errors. One piece of advice I would give to you is to find another saying other than it melted my heart when Tony looks in her eyes. I read it 2 or 3 times in the first 2 chapters so be careful about repeating yourself. Other than that, I love it!
    May 29th, 2013 at 01:19am
  • M. Evelyn

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    Hi! I found your story through that whole comment swap thing. OH MY GOODNESS. TONY. Ahhhhhhhhh<3 He's perfect! I'm more of a Criminal Minds, Spencer Ried kind of gale but Tony is extremely dreamy as well! Your layout is really really good! I also love how much imagery and description you give the reader so we can get a better understanding of what's going on in the story. When I read stories, I like to imagine what's going on like I'm playing the story as a movie in my head! This really helped me do that! I only read the first chapter and I'll try to keep reading more! Excellent story though! Keep writing and I hope I see one of your comments on one of my stories! Byeee! <3
    May 28th, 2013 at 01:11am
  • Peroxide Princess.

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    So I was brought here from comment swamp and I'm glad that I was! I like how you jump right into the story, I found that to be interesting. Also, I love how she ended up being the brave one and asking Tony out on the date. It gave me inspiration for myself, because I've been in somewhat of the same situation. Just not with hot policemen and I don't look near as good as Natalie. But I would like to say keep up with the story because it's good! You should definitely be proud of what you have. I wish you the best with this story! :)
    March 26th, 2013 at 07:14pm
  • Peroxide Princess.

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    So I was brought here from comment swamp and I'm glad that I was! I like how you jump right into the story, I found that to be interesting. Also, I love how she ended up being the brave one and asking Tony out on the date. It gave me inspiration for myself, because I've been in somewhat of the same situation. Just not with hot policemen and I don't look near as good as Natalie. But I would like to say keep up with the story because it's good! You should definitely be proud of what you have. I wish you the best with this story! :)
    March 26th, 2013 at 07:02pm
  • TheElegantFaerie

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    OOh I love it! Please continue! :)
    February 9th, 2013 at 04:07am
  • Red The Small

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    I am in love with DiNozzo, please updateeeee :) It's really good!
    January 5th, 2013 at 03:47am
  • Red The Small

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    I am in love with DiNozzo, please updateeeee :) It's really good!
    January 5th, 2013 at 03:47am
  • JustDuckie

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    UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 23rd, 2012 at 09:14am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I love this story <3
    August 24th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • Mrs. Sanders

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    I loved this chapter. Tony is completely in love with her. Can't wait to see where else you go with this story. Please update soon.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 03:32am
  • Mrs.Randy-Orton

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    i loved it <3 <3
    June 25th, 2012 at 01:19pm
  • Mrs.Randy-Orton

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    awwww i loved it <3 more please
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:07am
  • Mrs. Sanders

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    I loved this update. Tony is so sweet to her and I hope that they can keep her safe when she goes undercover. Please update as soon as you can.
    June 20th, 2012 at 07:53pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    I must admit, I've never before watched an entire episode of NCIS in my life, but I really love the way you're writing this! I think you've done an amazing job introducing the main characters and you transition points of view pretty flawlessly! I think I might just have to watch the show now ;)
    June 20th, 2012 at 07:30am
  • Betawolf

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    I like this a lot :) The layout is very good and simple. The characters are very realistic, and seem like real people. I do not watch CSI a lot but you made the story very easy to follow. The writing is very good and I have to say you have real talent as a writer, so keep up the good work!
    June 12th, 2012 at 09:29pm