No Matter What - Comments

Oooh, I like NCIS. I don't really know all the characters besides Gibbs and Abby. And I only know Abby because my mom named one of our cats after her. I haven't started reading yet but I usually take notes of the story in my comments so...

Loooooove stories! I love the sarcastic-ness of Ziva and McGee, honestly. That's how I would act. And "Hunky Monkey" ? Hilarious. I like how caring Tony is of Natalie. It shows how different she is to him when they don't sleep together.

That's all my notes, but honestly, you're really good at writing. I can barely keep the same storyline for 3 chapters, hahaha! But no, I like your layout and the story. It's nice, even though I'm not that big of an NCIS fan. Keep going!

I really like this :) very interesting!!! And I really like your layout and picture. You have an excellent sence for detail and giving me(the reader) a sence of emotion. That's really hard to come by in a story. :) your a excellent writer!!
Keep writing!!

From the comments below I gather this is about NCIS then, I don't really watch it so that might be why I was shocked that they all pulled guns out... I think your writing style is very good! However, I struggled to understand right at the first, as so many people were introduced with no description, maybe you could say something like "Nat curled her brunette hair around her manicured finger", but other than that it's good :)

The layout is very simple, and I enjoy the way it's set up. I also like the unique names of the characters. The length of your chapters allow readers to actually receive a decent update, instead of just two paragraphs like many others. Very well written.

Hey me again that was so sweet what Abby did for Nat. The hippo is awesome I love Burt. I loved that episode when tony was sick and laying in Abby's lab on Burt and when he rolled over the hippo farted. I loved it. So little psycho babble. Anyway thanks for updating. Update again soon ok.

i love it please more please

Loved this update. I hope she doesn't chicken out but I also hope Tony can convince them to find someone else. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. Please update as soon as you can.

OMG, I love NCIS and Tony is by far my favorite one. Don't get me wrong I love them all, but there is just something about DiNozzo. I love this story and I can't wait to read more. I subscribed to it also.

Any way Nat is awesome and I believe that she could do it. Tony should in courage her to at least try but be safe doing it. Is Abby and Tim are together in this story? If so I think that is so cute. And I can't be more happy that Gibbs approves of the relationship in the office.

So all in all awesome story so far update ASAP ok. Thanks. :)

OMG! I love this story! It's beautifully written. Also, you're spelling & grammar are wonderful. I'll def keep reading. I love criminal mind kind of stories, but apparently this is from another show, I have to watch that one too! I can't wait to read more, keep at it!

I don’t see enough stories about DiNozzo and I love this one. I can’t wait to see where you go with this one. I feel bad for Natalie because they are forcing her to go undercover. I have a feeling that Tony will be her hero and make them change their minds. I can’t wait to read more. Please update as soon as you can.

this is really good!

I’ve been a huge fan of NCIS for as long as I can remember. So yes,
of course I’m excited to read this story! I’ve always had a crush on Tony
and I just love how you managed to portray his character perfectly.

Well, not just his character. Pretty much all of them. Especially Gibbs, Ziva,
and McGee. This story is very well written and I’m eager to continue
reading this!

I can’t wait to see what you plan to do with Natalie’s character! And of course,
with Tony.

it's tony, of course there's going to be sex at the end.

omg omg omg. i love him so much, you just don't understand. he's such a cutie and you portrayed him so well. i just love it so much. sometimes fanfictios stray away from the character's real personality but you really hit tony spot on and i'm impressed. keep up the good work!

I've genuinely only seen NCIS a handful of times, though there are some characters which stick in your head! This was very well written, and, from what I can remember of the characters, very true to the way they are usually written. The dialogue flows perfectly, to the point where not an awful lot of description is needed - it's generally quite difficult to achieve that, so I commend you! xx

Before I read this, I had no clue who most of that characters were because I, myself, am not part of the NCIS fandom. From the point of view from someone who hasn't really gotten into the show, this was well written and descriptive enough to the point where you don't really need to be part of the fandom. I also love your writing style. Good luck with the rest of the story. x

I've read your stuff before so when I saw you as the author I actually got really excited! :3 As always, I enjoy your writing, but I am a little lost on this. It could be my fault though because I have no idea what this fandom is. If I knew what was going on though, I would be excited to see how this turned out. There isn't much description but the writing catches your attention because you just want to see what happens in the end! This story is looking good!

I've watched NCIS a lot, and I love how true to the characters' personalities you were. Abbie was especially well written, in my opinion. I adored Tony; how he was so true to character even with the little "transformation" of being a gentleman. I definitely could see him doing everything that you wrote him doing, especially when he told Nat he was going to kiss her. He'd be so awkward in a real relationship in some ways, and that's one of them. You have great story ideas and I love the McGee/Abbie relationship; they really would be an adorable on-screen couple. You really picked up extremely well on the atmosphere between all the characters, and you should definitely continue; I'd love to read more! :)

I'm not sure what fandom this is written about/for but I don't think I need to know. I really enjoyed reading it. Natalie's character is fun and quirky which is my favorite character to read. I absolutely love the way you write her. If I have one criticism it would be the layout-- I think you're doing yourself an injustice (in a way) by having the story area so tiny. It makes it look like you're writing more than you are. I think that if you made it a little bit wider it would help push you to write a little bit more. But of course, if you don't want to, don't. The story is still awesome :)

Alrighty, I am a huge NCIS fan and I just want to point out how realistic this is with the show. So kudos on that first of all. Secondly, can I suggest a couple of things. One being to use extra spacing when you switch between POVs in one chapter as to not confuse readers where one POV ends and another starts. And the other is to possiby explain who Natalie is in the first chapter or two and not in five because as a NCIS fan, this girl came out of nowhere and while that is fine, it helps to have a little lead as to where it came from. Otherwise, I'm a fan of your story.

This is a very good story, aha, I don't watch much NCIS though, if ever. So I don't really know who any of these people are - but you have written it perfectly and you need to continue.. If you want of course. I don't know, I'm rambling. Aha.

-Greg.