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Please update soon!!!
Please update soon!!!
Please update soon!!!
Please update soon!!!
Please update soon!!!
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I loved the way this story was going. PLEASE CONTINUE UPDATING!! <3

Hiya.
So, I've subbed to this story because I loved your other one so much. Speaking of your other story, what happened to it?

Hey! I absolutely LOVE your story so far! It's fun and creative, and Eesha reminds me of one of my best friends. (:
You're doing a wonderful job so far, so keep up the great work!
Can't wait for an update.
-Kate

I can't believe he kicked her out! Poor Eesha

I just read chapter five and I thought that Rebecca was his girlfriend not Perrie? Anyways, awesome update and I can't believe he kicked her out!

Very interesting, especially with Oli. I feel as if we shall be seeing Oli again, seems like there's some unfinished business. But I also want to know how Zayn knows about Oli's behavior.

It was a lot easier to read this time, you could tell who was talking and Zayn's character does seem realistic, but personally I don't think he would be that rude to the boys. But, for the story the character fits him to a tee.

Niall gave her a nickname! Which is super duper cute. I wonder if it will be Harry or Niall who take the bigger liking to her though. But she's already starting to have feelings for Zayn- which brings me to another point. Please don't make them do a 180 on their feelings for each other. One thing I hate (and I know it annoys others) is when the relationship moves to fast, just want to caution you on that. Even I do it sometimes.

But awesome story and I can't wait for more(: Oh and sorry for such the long review. I just had so much to say.

Kathleen xx

NO! You can't end it there! I want to find out what happened to Oli!!

I really like this story. It's really good. The only thing that bugs me a tiny bit is the chapter titles in Arabic (Pakistan's official language is Urdu) but I don't really mind. I can't wait for the explanation of what happened between the two of them.

This story has mad potential. I think it would be a lot easier to read and understand who was speaking if you started another paragraph when someone else starts to talk. In fact, that's really how it should be done, but I've seen a lot of other people do it the way you have.

I think you need a bit of a solid background story to Zayn and Eesha. It would be nice to know why Zayn hates her and is "ruining his life" and why Eesha has the same feelings towards him (though you did touch that barely when you mentioned she wouldn't care about him if he was going to treat her so badly).

Just some suggestions. But I'm going to sub and I'm excited to see more(:

Kathleen xx