The Favored - Comments

ChristieDesrosiers (100)

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Hi! I love this so far :) I like the way you've started it; doesn't give away too much but it is a lovely start with the amount of dialogue. I know this is a late comment.. haa I haven't been on mibba in a long while. But, you should so start it up again! xx

March 30th, 2013 at 05:16am

luminos. (600)

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I absolutely loved this so far! The preface was really good and it was a perfect introduction to the story! I think you have a really great idea for the plot and there are so many places you could take it. I really like Belle so far! I just wish she would stand up for herself more!

June 5th, 2012 at 11:10pm

GrimmOSauris (100)

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I TAKE AWAY YOUR COMMENT VIRGINITY!!! MWUAHAHAHA! Lol.
I love this story already- subscribed!

May 28th, 2012 at 03:10am