Jesus of Suburbia - Comments

This story is really good! I'm writing a story based off Green Day's albums as well (don't worry, I won't steal your ideas, I've already got my whole novel planned out, XD) but anyway, your story is VERY well written and it's interesting. Keep updating please!

Ooh, another bitch I can hate. Lauren just doesn't get it. Lol, but it'd be pretty funny to see Jimmy dealing with her. And who exactly is she? Like, is she a soldier? What part does she play in the whole army scenario?

Keep updating, dear, it's BEAUTIFUL.

Oh my God, fucking finally. I thought I was gonna die, waiting for this shit to get updated. >....> But now that it has, I can fucking be happy again! I envy you your talent in writing Jimmy. Huh, when I write Jimmy he comes out as some pansy ass crybaby.

You officially rock.

I love that your chapters are short but so worth reading! The flow is really nice, which either comes naturally to you or you work really hard on it, because when I write sometimes things are jerky. You're writing style is impressive and it makes this story really enjoyable to read. Comment swap brought me here and I'm really glad because this story is positively lovely!

Amazing as always. XP
I'm hooked its so awesome.
Your writing style is peferct.
He sounds so real in my mind like I see every happening.
Update soon? :D

I meant how you write in that last comment.
Sorry. :/

Love. Love this story so much! : D
I adore now you write. :)
You leave me reading start till end without breaking or stopping.
Update soon, love?

JIMMY IS GOING TO THE ARMY. WHAT THE FUCK.

Wow. Brah, I mean I love the kid, but I have to say however badass he is in the city, he won't last a week in the Army. Random plot twist haha.

But I loved it! Glad I own this! LOL update ofteeennnnnnnnnn!!!

Aieee. This is pro. But I have a question: have I already adopted it? I think I have... yeah, I have. Now shut me the fuck up I'm ranting...

ANYWAYS! The update was beautiful as usual ;) You're a really talented writer and you capture the spirit of the Saint and his gang better than anyone else I read from. Hope ya keep writing and get published =D

-J

Jimmy !!! :3 Comment swap brought me here , and all I can say is : WOAH! :3

I really like the way you write , it somehow breathes the '' air " of professialism :) !!! Really it's a great story , the plot is awesome and the chapters - even though they are not that long - are great !

Generally the story is flowing without getting stuck at any points , and that shows just how great you are :)

Keep it up ;) You have talent :3 .

Just started reading. I love it!! :) You're an amazing writer.

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I can honestly say this is one of the most well-written stories I'm read in a while. Your sentences seem to flow together nicely and you have good- great wording. Keep it up. :)

This is the best Jesus of Suburbia story I have ever read.
I love it. I have always wanted to write a story like this but never came around to it.
You would have put mine to shame.
Its amazing. :D

I love this so much!!
Can't wait for the next update xD

O: I envy your skill.

It's amazing.

Update often, or else. :3

Oh wow, I love this!!
Please do update soon, love! :D

Omg. I looked at your synopsis page, with the pic of Jimmy, and the title and I was like, this is mine. May I claim it? Please?

You have a gift for writing Billie, even if you deny it. I really do hope you stick to this one and are encouraged and motivated to continue. I look forward to reading the chapters that follow. =)