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This is a nice little piece and everyone should give it a read. Seriously, it's so cleanly written, about a subject that probably every single One Direction fan has imagined themselves being in, and it's relatively realistic.

Niall is a cute little Irish thing, especially in this, and Jessica, your main character, seems sweet. I get all kinds of feels reading about them.

Anyways, brilliant job on this! I didn't see a single typo or grammatical error, so kudo's to you! :)

this is so cute so far! update soon, please! :)

-Elsie

This was really cute. c:

Wow, so hahaha apparently 'editing' comments isn't QUITE working right. So forgive that weird ass comment down there. Anyway, this was super cute and I enjoyed it a lot! (:

Cuteness overload right there!! Basically I'm really excited for this story, because it's Niall and you're a really great writer! I read your story Prickled wayyy back in the day when you first posted it! Anyway, I'm looking forward to more! (:

Oh my freaking God. This was quite possibly the cutest thing I have ever read. Suck with romance MY FOOT, SKYE.

I actually just can't. I was grinning like a giant fool the entire time and squealed at the end because YOU MADE THEM FALL ASDLJASLKJLASJLDASLD.

Dying. Dying so hard right now.

<3