Ordinary Things - Comments

I love how you described the feelings and the sensations in this chapter. You are an excellent writer. Please update soon I

Well they just keep running into each other. Seems to me that it's happening for a reason, and they're both liking it. Especially Laura if she's going to masturbate to the image of Matt. Loved the update! :D

Please update soon :D

Very good update! I feel bad for Laura but that's the price she's paid. I feel that she'll be getting what she wants soon though.

Loved the chapter. A little insight into Laura was definitely good, especially when it explained why she acts like a bitch. I like knowing it's not for no reason at all. Can't wait for the next one. :)

I really like this, it's super different from all other stories. I'm so tired of those stories of like the weird girl getting with the hot guy, and this is a great break from that. I love how rude she is and that she's a successful woman. It makes the story seem more realistic. Keep up the good work - subscribed.

WOW....she's nuts. Love how Matt tries to talk with her. Great Chapter, Update soon.

Yeah! Already updated! You go girl!

I actually freaking love this! Mostly because she's a bit of a bitch, and I never see fanfics where the girl's a bitch. XD But I also love how well written this is too. Can't wait for more!

This looks pretty good so far? How often do you think you'll be able to update? Definitely gonna subscribe to this. xD

I'm really liking this. Please update more and I already subscribed :D