Somebody That I Used to Know - Comments

This is such a good story! The picture is really cool, to start off with, with the faded thing that gives it that edge, and then the simple lettering at the top. Great job! I also really like your summary. Really great job with this, and I love your writing style ;). Keep up the good work!

Not much of a fan of All Time Low but I like this story. Comment swap brought me here of course. Glad it did. Good attention to detail. I hope you continue to write more :) I like Jasey's personality. And the story is different from those I've read before.

Not much of a fan of All Time Low but I like this story. Comment swap brought me here of course. Glad it did. Good attention to detail. I hope you continue to write more :) I like Jasey's personality.

Comment Swap brought me here, but I've never read a story like this. Where it's Alex's daughter. The first chapter or the prologue was so sad, especially the part about Jasey listening to Jasey Rae just to hear Alex say her name. Honestly this is well written and a storyline that's not done often, keep it up! :)

Not at all familiar with the band. I love the prologue. It's very well described, and I feel a connection with the man character already, which is something that is pretty important to me when reading a story. I can spot out the main character. I really do think you're doing a good job :) keep up the good work!

You should continue this, it's an interesting story and I'd love to hear Alex's reasoning behind not being involved in her life, as well as Jack, Zack, and Rian's feelings about her. It's pretty well written, but it could flow better. I like that you've already given us the back story and showed us that her mom seems to still like/love Alex. I would also like to know if he has feelings for her mother. So, yeah, you should definitely continue this, I think you have the potential for a great story.

aw, this is cute (: it's very different and I think it's off to a great start. I really think this story has a lot of potential. I like how her name is Jasey and that she wants to get to know Alex as her dad. I hope she does get that chance! really great job (:

pretty good prologue :)

love itt :)

love itt :)