Damn, this was dramatic. I like dramatic. POOR HARRY. Cecily sucks (hehe, sorry Cecilia, if you see this). I do give her kudos to getting better BECAUSE HE'S HARRY FUCKING STYLES. COME ON.
Okay anyway, back to the story. I can see bits of the song in this! And the song itself is kinda dramatic and I like that you incorporated that into the story.
Oh, and I also like that they didn't instantly get back together. That annoys me when people do that. I like that you left the ending where they are starting to patch things up again. It gives the reader the ability to imagine whatever they want to imagine about the ending.
Damn, this was dramatic. I like dramatic. POOR HARRY. Cecily sucks (hehe, sorry Cecilia, if you see this). I do give her kudos to getting better BECAUSE HE'S HARRY FUCKING STYLES. COME ON.
Okay anyway, back to the story. I can see bits of the song in this! And the song itself is kinda dramatic and I like that you incorporated that into the story.
Oh, and I also like that they didn't instantly get back together. That annoys me when people do that. I like that you left the ending where they are starting to patch things up again. It gives the reader the ability to imagine whatever they want to imagine about the ending.
Good job!