I remember reading this story a long time ago, but I'm glad I found it again! I don't know why I lost track but YAY! :)
One thing though that's kinda buggy me is the long paragraphs. If you just divided those sentences to make smaller paragraphs that would make reading easier...but other then that I like this and want you to post more.
One thing though that's kinda buggy me is the long paragraphs. If you just divided those sentences to make smaller paragraphs that would make reading easier...but other then that I like this and want you to post more.
I want to learn more about her being a protector.
Great job :)