Better Man (aka Speak of the Devil: Stockholm Syndrome) - Comments

I really love this story! Write more soon!

Muy, muy bueno Senor Chocobo.
Need moooooreeee~
I'll post your update as soon as I finish my English paper xp

So I just started reading but I can already say that I am hooked!! The vivid characters and romantic and sinister plot lines are absolutely captivating. The story itself is 10 shots of sweetness and 2 of pure darkness. Keep writing! You really love this story and its characters and it truly shows! Keep it up!!!

Alright, as I've messaged you before.. I've absolutely fallen in love with this story (: You've got me hooked like a druggie on meth xD
I demand another update ;D I can't wait for it :D This is the best plot, and I can't wait to see what happens with Jimmy and Tyson, and also Jimmy and Isaac. This should be interesting (:

Okay Tyson is alright, he just pisses me off sometimes. But I feel like Izzy is better for him...
Ahpadshfioa

Go Gramps! You still never cease to amaze me.
For some reason, I want Jimmy to stay with Tyson, but I also want Jimmy to end up with Isaac.
Idk, it just seems like Tyson does mean well, he just isn't well, if that makes any sense...
Gahhhh! I'm confusing myself >.<'
Anywhore, awesome updates! (As usual.)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S. I shall have your link posted within the week. Sorry it's taken me so long to post it up. I haven't had the time to write lately and it sucks cause I really wanna update -_-'
Oh well, better late than never I suppose :P

Yay for Isaac and Jimmy!! More chapters, please? :D

It was rather amusing. Hehe I like how Rian stole Jimmy's shirt, it made me giggle! Can't wait for the epic chapter :)

Yay for updates! c:
I like Ricky, he has my name XD
Anyways, nice job! I love how Jimmy was all, "He's kissing MY Izzy!" I would've don't the same thing except I would've said, "Bitch, that's MY man!" Lol
Oh, and don't worry Gramps, I promise to whore out your story like the hooker on the corner like a nice pimp would :)

I actually really like Izzy and I hope for him and Jimmy to perhaps be able to be together without Tyson troubles. I just really want to know more about Tyson! But this update was so nice, I honestly didn't know what to expect from Izzy but since he's so caring, I've decided that I'm on his side.

Yay updates! I like Izzy so much. He's a gentleman all the way :) Can't wait for their discussion!

I love this story! Mind if I put a link to it in one of mine?

I'll hold off on hating Tyson until I read his explanation and then maybe I just won't wanna dislike him so much anymore... Still got a lotta love for this story and keep up the awesomeness :)

Ahh! I just found this story and I am in love with it already! It is amazing, can't wait for more! You are an amazing writer! (:

Ray...... This is utterly amazing. You HAVE TO post more!!!!! <33333

Poor Jimmy :( Sorry, but I am currently hating on Tyson. And your pps sounds extremely suggestive. I am now curious!

I genuinely enjoy your array of characters, especially Izzy. I'm looking forward to reading more; I really get excited for updates from this story.

Ahhhh another one! I love those two! Boo Tyson. "They should just learn to share me" made me chuckle for some reason. It was cute. Curiosity....

Good chapter! Hehe I love Nate. I'm sorry about your ex! I hope you find someone way better!
Thanks for the shout out :) Glad I could help.

Good chapter! Hehe I love Nate. I'm sorry about your ex! I hope you find someone way better!
Thanks for the shout out :) Glad I could help.