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  • Takoda

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    OI. WOMAN. WRITE MORE. :O
    moreeeeeee. e_e
    I'll update mine soon. If you update yours! :P
    November 4th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • ber1110

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    Aweeeeeeesomeeeee.
    Way to make me cry though. D;
    You made up for it though so yay! There is love again. :D
    Just in this sentence: "I explained to the security person my situation, and did a quick pat down, and let me go,..." I think it should be "... and he did a quick pat down, and let me go" or she, I mean it doesn't matter the gender. xD
    August 28th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • Takoda

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    WRITE MORE AT ONCE, WOMAN. D;
    August 28th, 2012 at 05:08pm
  • H. S.

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    Thank you so much for the comment on my story "Love is a Scary Thing"! I really appreciate it! Smile And I'm glad you liked it.
    July 21st, 2012 at 05:52pm
  • Bree10

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    :DDD
    June 19th, 2012 at 10:38am
  • ber1110

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    Oh, just noticed this! "You didn’t seem to care for six months, but when your mother calls me, to tell me your having your child, you care?" It should be, "you're," not "your."
    I can't wait for you to update. I've already read the next two or three chapters, but still. Keep writing and make sure it ends in a happy ending! :)
    June 17th, 2012 at 01:09am
  • MRGF123

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    Going to be as great as the last one :) I've already seen the next chapter - can't wait! XD
    May 26th, 2012 at 02:38pm
  • ber1110

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    I strongly dislike you for this. Ever heard of a happy ending? :(
    Love you ;)
    May 25th, 2012 at 11:19pm