He Never Told Me What He Did for a Living - Comments

I hope she doesn't actually go

I'm falling in love with this story! I love jealous Gerard in fics. Update soon, pretty please?

I love this chapter!

Omigosh, I nearly died when I saw the title that comment swap had given me! This is the first time I've got a My Chem story. I think you've hit Gerard's character on the head, you've got him perfect. Really looking forward to your next update, keep up the good work!

The layout is nice and simple, I like it that way. The story was very well written, full of detail and description. The summary pulled me in right away, curious about the rest of the story, which did not disappoint. The story flows very nicely and the chapters are good lengths. Overall, it's an awesome story! Keep up the great work!

Brilliant update :3

Wow, I've not read any My Chem stories in yeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaarrrsss. I have to say this was rathe cute though, and the way you write Gerard's character is exactly as it should be.
The only thing I didn't quite understand is the reason why Gerard has been introduced when there is such a large age gap between the two characters. It just seemed a little odd and out of place, but I'm sure the rest of the storyline will balance that out.
Overall, a fantastically exciting and descriptive story with a light tone - update soon!

Okay, it took me a little bit longer than what it should have to read this all. Lol. I kept getting distracted. BUT I'm glad I got through it, because it was really good. I love me some Gerard, so I hope you update this often. If you do I will be back to read. :D

Any other teen girl wouldn't mind being kidnapped by the Way's!

Well I must admit this is kind of cute. I really like your characterisation of Gee and Mikey - it shows you know the band quite well.
I laughed at them eating spaghetti - I can so imagine them doing that. I thought Josie was quite a good character - not too antagonising, and quite relatable. My favourite is Grandma Rain, however.
I only noticed two mistakes, both in the first chapter: past Halloweens gone by and I'm glad its fall.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it redundant to have both 'past' and 'gone by' in the same sentence? I think it'd be better if it were just 'past Halloweens' or 'Halloweens gone by'.
And the its should have an apostrophe c:
Other than that, well done!

Well I must admit this is kind of cute. I really like your characterisation of Gee and Mikey - it shows you know the band quite well.
I laughed at them eating spaghetti - I can so imagine them doing that. I thought Josie was quite a good character - not too antagonising, and quite relatable. My favourite is Grandma Rain, however.
I only noticed two mistakes, both in the first chapter: past Halloweens gone by and I'm glad its fall.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't it redundant to have both 'past' and 'gone by' in the same sentence? I think it'd be better if it were just 'past Halloweens' or 'Halloweens gone by'.
And the its should have an apostrophe c:
Other than that, well done!

Isn't that the wonderful thing about fiction though? Anything can happen and it doesn't have to make sense.

Edward Cullen is a 100 year old vampire dating a eighteen year old girl, which is a bigger age gap than, say, twenty-nine and eighteen.

I find it weird that her grandmother and Gerard's mom would want them to be friends seeing as they have quite an age difference but this is a good story so far, it would seem.

Good rewrite lol We'll just have to wait and see what happens in the meantime maybe I'll finish the original and maybe an update for ATOBS