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  • blasttyrant

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    Oh hoho! I'm off to read the sequels!
    June 29th, 2012 at 02:17pm
  • Goddess of Mischief

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    *fans self* this was pure amazingness
    June 9th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • Space Juju

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    oh my god! i'm in love. I'll go and read the sequel right now!
    May 31st, 2012 at 09:10pm
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    I can't wait for the sequel! x3
    Try developing Kaia's character more in the next one, because she's a spitfire in my head; so give her some flare that will make Loki wish her dead, but draw him in even more.
    May 27th, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • moka4246

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    This chapter is amazing - can't wait for the sequel. :-) Amazing story. :-)
    May 27th, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • moka4246

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    Oh sweet Lord that chapter left me in pieces. Keep up the wonderful & fantastic work. :-D
    May 27th, 2012 at 08:01am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    -shudders- That was hot to the nth degree! I liked how there was just enough roughness that I didn't feel awkward reading it, but there was still the sensualness that I commented about before. And just the kicker with the hole love type of scene made me like it a whole lot more!
    Continue updating this please!
    May 27th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    Love, love, loved the new update. The before sensual sexiness just ignited my imagination before I could even blink, and I loved that!
    Also I'm happy you picked/made a layout, because I love seeing a story have individualism away from the default layout.
    May 27th, 2012 at 02:24am
  • moka4246

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    Awesome story - absolutely love it. Can't wait for the next update. :-D
    May 27th, 2012 at 02:09am
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    This is a good start to a good story please keep it going! Mr. Green
    May 26th, 2012 at 03:09am
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