Not So Perfect Landing - Comments

Comment swap has brought me here. I really like your writing style, it all flows very well. This is very nice! You've got me curious. I did not notice many spelling or grammatical errors which is always a plus for everyone. Nice job! Keep up the good work!

Kristen :)

The plot of this story is really interesting. I do agree with some of the others, though, you have some grammatical errors that kind of make it harder to read. Anyway, the idea of an Olympic gymnast meeting her mother for the very first time is really unique. I'd like to read more sometime. :)

thanks(: i love it

i love this story, but how old exactly is Alexa now? and do the siblings still live there? sorry for the questopns im just curious. but update soon please?

Honestly at first, by the way your character talked, i thought she was literally 5. She doesn't sound like a teenager and I got that when Jason came into the story. Overall, maybe of you changed 'daddy' to 'dad' every once in a while.
Besides that and some grammatical errors/typos, I think this story has potential. Also I wasn't sure if I should read the sequels... Do I have to read those to understand Kelsey and Alexa's dads relationship? Reply back and if anything, I'll most likely read the prequels :)
Keep up the great work!

The story is okay. You do have a few grammar mistakes though, and it made it kind of hard for me to read. You end up forgetting punctuation marks and capitalization. It was good though, and I found it interesting. I hope you continue. :)

cant wait for the rest of it.... and greenhampters676 theres a hide comments button at the bottom

Can't really read some of the story.. The comment part of the page is taking up some ofthe story