June 8th, 2012 at 11:59am
I just noticed the first half of my comment didn't post.... so here it is:
The layout is very nice and you make it quite easy to read. Although Naruto isn't my thing (per se), I thought you did very well with making it easy for someone who didn't much care for the subject to read it.
Very interesting and captivating! (: Keep it up!
[This was for the Comment Swap]
However, writing wise, your writing style is good. You're a very talented writer. Keep up the good work. ^_^