Time and Consequence - Comments

Ok so I'm here from Comment Swap and I was only planning on reading the first chapter, but I got so sucked in that I ended reading the whole thing :-p
A few little things that I noticed were obviously spelling and grammatical errors, but you had even admitted to having them in there. Your story flowed really nicely for the most part and though I'm not familiar with The Maine, I still really enjoyed it.
I was actually really disappointed with your final chapter. It ended way too soon and you just threw it all in there. It would have been much better if you had actually taken the time to write out the confrontation between Carly and Sadie (I was looking forward to that) and I'm left unsatisified not knowing whether or not she got her necklace back, especially after how much it means to her. I expected more from this story after getting so caught up in it and I was really disappointed by the ending :(
But other than that I really enjoyed it :)

what i said down there still holds true :P

Asdfghjkl. Loved this. I like...need more right now xD

Can't wait for the rest <3

don't apologize! long chapters are good! keep up with the excellent writing :)

yay! such a great story!

yay! such a great story!

this is really good so far! update soon :)

I like Sadie's character xD moorreee please ^.^

Great story! I can't wait for the chapter!

This story has great potential and you have managed to execute it very well
The Maine is my best friend's favorite band and my 8th favorite

Omg I like it! I will definitely keep on reading to see how this pans out.
I loved Garrett at the end, he's too cute.

aw thanks girl!

VICKY. this is good. i like!