That was unexpected, I really like how you turned Theodore gay. It makes the story even more interesting than it already was. I think that's a really authentic idea.
I absolutely adore your writing style. You have the perfect mix of dialogue and description. It’s really just lovely, and it was able to catch and hold my attention very easily. And I just love how you actually describe what Elle looks like, because a lot of authors don’t! I have a clear picture of her in my mind when I read, and I love that about your story! I also think it’s very amusing the way Elle and Draco interact. It is so typical of Draco, and I just love it! Overall, I just think this is a really excellent story and I really hope you keep writing it!
Maybe if you get some more comments, you'll get some more motivation! I subscribed to your story from your fifth chapter. I love the story! So far, although it's kinda of a BAM! in your face beginning, it's not too overbearing. It makes sense and isn't rushed. I haven't read a Draco Malfoy fanfic I've liked, until now. I enjoy your style of writing. It's straight and to the point but with personality in between the words. I can't wait to read your next update!
Oh yay! I liked Theo by the way, his character is very knowing. And clearly Elle was blind, really blind to not see his feelings. Can't wait till they kiss. :D