Awh, this was really cute. I love the way you incorporated the riddle. I like how she found the answer in the mirror and how she found the picture of him. I must say, Daniel has quite the timing.
The only mistake I noticed was in the line “I told you I’d be back,”. The comma should be a period and I would suggest moving the dialogue down to the next line to make it flow better.
The only mistake I noticed was in the line “I told you I’d be back,”. The comma should be a period and I would suggest moving the dialogue down to the next line to make it flow better.
Good job on this. :)