Glitter, Guts, Glory - Comments

OMG, I am so sorry that this took me so long to comment. :O
I loved the last few chapters! :)
Aww... so we finally found out more with Rose's death. I found it very sentimental that Leo and Daisy ended up kind of naming their first daughter after her: Rosie. :') And I'm glad Daisy forgave Leo; that was really big of her and wasn't an easy thing to do, but you can tell Leo is going to stay faithful to her for the rest of their marriage. <3
And I love the way this ended. Gave the next generation a happy ending too. :) I'm so glad that you did. Sad endings are just... sad. lol. :(
Oh, and I also loved how you gave us a take in Daisy's POV, the chapter before last. That just let us know the truth on things with her. Oh, and then with Rose's chapter, with her funeral and stuff... you showed us that Leo's parents, Paris and Juliet, really do care for their kids. :') Not that I suspected they didn't, but you really displayed that with Juliet especially at the end of the chapter. And that they've... realized all of the stuff they've done. It just goes with showing how strong their characters are, and how they have no regrets and just accept life as it happened, as it is, and how it's going to happen.
Anyway, amazing job with this story. Seriously. And I am so sorry that this took me so long to comment. I am horrible. :/
I'm going to miss this story. But I'm glad that I read it. :)
Phenomenal job. :D

Oh my god! I loved every second of this! It was a perfect sequel to another fabulous story... I'm gonna miss reading this, but I can't wait to see what you write next! (because hopefully you're not done writing) :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3
THAT. WAS. SO. CUTE.
I am /ded/ and also sad because this is over, but it was wonderful, per usual :)

you need to write another story<3 about this or not. i just love your writing!

I MISSED YOU.

ZOMG. <3

AND OMG, ONE OTHER THING I FORGOT TO POINT OUT!!
'"It's a lave lamp, Paris!" my mom threw her newly sparkling shoe at dad. He ducked at the last second. "How in the world did you get Disney World out of that?"'
PARIS!! So it is their kids!!! :DD
lol. Just thought that was so cool because you were like, verifying it. :DD And so that means his mother's Juliet. :DD
Okay, I'm done. :P

Loved the updates! :D
One thing to point out. Or well, two, but only one notes a mistake... maybe, idk:
'"Mrs and Mrs. D'Angelo," Daisy begins. She grins really wide.'
^ In Maple. lol. Right there she was talking to Leo's parents, right? So I believe one of those 'Mrs.' should be 'Mr'. lol. Just a minor thing, really.
And then the other thing:
'"You're the one who makes me feel like an idiot," I rest my chin on her shoulder. She stops chopping. "I always feel like I'm going to say the wrong thing around you."'
Dawh... I thought that was so cute! :D Especially the part where he rests his chin on her shoulder. :')
I can't wait for more of this! :D

OKAY ONE HUGE COMMENT GRATIFYING MY LOVE FOR YOU AND THIS STORY:
k well 1. I sound like a pretentious beeyotch in the last comment but I swear I only say if you want with le layout that you can ask me because of the author's note. I dig the background though. I'm a sucker for floral.

OKAY NOW I HOPE YOU LOVE ME AGAIN BECAUSE I WILL SAY THIS: DKLJASKLDALKSJDLAJSKDLAJSKLDJLAKSJKDLASJDL. That's how I feel right now and reading this story. I was confused beyond words because for a second I thought that Leo was Paris so I was confused and I was like "WTF HAPPENED TO JULIET" and then I realized and yeah. Silly me.

This is actually sooo cute. I love that you made it about Paris and Juliet's son. THAT IS SO CUTE. And I am oh-so-very curious to know how Rose died. Must've been really sad. I think I'm more sad for Paris and Juliet than I am for Leo. Whoops. I guess my heart still belongs to them.

ANYWHOOOOO, I LOVE THIS AND IDEK WHY I DIDN'T READ THIS SOONER. You rock gurl. UPDATE SOON!

I am reading le capitulo dos and I see you are having layout trouble. If you want any help, I can be good with that!

ANYWAYS. I AM GETTING DISTRACTED BECAUSE NOW WE CAN READ AND COMMENT AT THE EXACT SAME TIME. and I am spamming you now. I swear, no more until I'm all caught up.

Hopefully.

WHOA
WAIT A SECOND
HOLD THE FUCK UP
SLUTS IN LOVE HAS A SEQUEL?!?!?!??!?!?!
WHERE THE FUCK HAVE I BEEN THIS ENTIRE TIME? OH MY GAH.

BRB. READING ~~~~

Love your story, quite amazing really. I loved Sluts In Love so f-ing much and when I read this I was almost disappointed because I thought that Paris and Juilet weren't gonna be in it but in the last chapter when you mentioned Juilet's eyes and the father as Paris I went all #(*%*#$&*(#%&^@$ and started laughing happily because you kept them in the story, even if not that big of a role. Very clever. I give major props for that.

OMG, I am SO sorry for the delay in comments. And WTF? No one else has commented? You have to be kidding me. :o
I am so sorry, though. I took a little break from Mibba and just missed commenting after all of those updates. But I'm finally caught up, though, and loved the new chapters! :D
Hm... I like how you have something happen in one chapter, and then it seems like in the very next chapter, you explain it. Or like, go to the part that leaves us wondering. Usually I see authors on here like, wait until much later and they leave us wondering... but you tell us right after which solves our curiosities and doesn't leave us wondering. lol. I like that. :)
Um... two things to note:
In chapter 7, this sentence:
'If I thought meeting everyone was endless, saying goodbye was just as bed.'
'bed' should be 'bad', right?
And in the latest chapter you posted:
'From the way mom is staring, it looks like her green eye is one me and the blue on is on Daisy.'
I think you confused the 'one' and 'on' in this sentence. lol. Like, where 'one' is, it should be 'on', and then where 'on' is, it should be 'one'. :P
But that's all I spotted. :)
Sorry again for such a delay in commenting! But you're doing a great job, really!
Can't wait for more! :D

Yay, an update! Loved the new chapter! :D
Aha... I love how you put a gypsy in this. Very unique, like this story is as a whole. :P
I think of gypsies as the way Leo was thinking of them, I suppose. lol. Though they seem kind of normal, I guess. Other than the fact that they marry so young. But they kind of live like Americans did in the 50's and what not... with the women being housewives and then the men going out and being the bread-winners.
Anyway, great job with the update! Interesting relationship they have... they had only just met and already started a fight. Unless this is taking place sometime long after their first meeting. You said it wasn't really in chronological order, so, yeah. XD
But you just gave us some of the first dosage of how their relationship goes.
I'm rambling now, lol. Can't wait for more! :D

Great update!
Aww... when they first met! I'm glad you're going back, because I believe it will make more sense this way. So we know what all happened between them, how close they got, and what exactly happened to make it fall apart. :( And that way, we find out who Jake is. I remember you mentioned that guy's name in the second update. Aha.
I'm dying to know: are Leo's parents Juliet and Paris? Or are they a more distant connection to this story? I believe you said it was more of a spin-off, so idk if you put them close to these characters or not. But that's what I was thinking as I read the beginning of this new update. Aha. Because Juliet would be unique enough to name pretty much all of her kids after flowers. :P
But anyway, loved the update! :D Can't wait for more! :D

Loved the update! :D
lol. When you were describing Marcus, I was picturing Justin Bieber the whole time. XD No joke. Because of how he looked so young and all... and just the way he dressed reminded me of him too. He's such an amateur thug. XD
Anyway, great job with the update. You have me wondering about these characters even more now. And the layout is beautiful! Why do you want to change it? :( I think it's great the way it is. I meant to say that last time but forgot. :/
Can't wait for more! :D

T.T I'm confused, as usual. But I have no doubt you'll un-confuse me in a few more chapters cause that's usually how it goes =] my first thought was that this was a memory of him apologizing to his future wife for sleeping with that tessa girl? I don't know who jake is but that was funny! Keep it up!

T.T I'm confused, as usual. But I have no doubt you'll un-confuse me in a few more chapters cause that's usually how it goes =] my first thought was that this was a memory of him apologizing to his future wife for sleeping with that tessa girl? I don't know who jake is but that was funny! Keep it up!

...curious. Very curious. (:

...curious. Very curious. (: