My Body Is a Cage - Comments

This story was amazing! You did something very unique and I commend you for that! I love that you went out of the box and were still able to capture the essence of the characters. Even though it was different, it still felt very believable. And the way you described the effect of Jenna's death made it seem even more real. You did an amazing job with quote and this was the most unique entry I had!

Although I'm not familiar with who you're writing about, I love the way that you set the tone in there. It may just be me, merely being an emotional fuck, though it probably is your writing; but I feel the emotions of Elena. I felt really terrible when Alaric died. Keep writing!

So how did you on the contest?

“One day I’ll meet someone that will promise me forever, and actually mean it.”

This introduction is so nice. It makes me want to curl up in a ball and have all these feels around me. Hahaha. But because of this, I am now wanting to become a vampire. :D

Wow, this was really good. You're a fantastic writer. Very emotional.

Aw. I literally almost started tearing up at the end. I can see how the two of them would get along but I can also see how when she loses him, she wants nothing to do with living anymore. I really enjoyed it and keep up the good work.