Letters on My Nightstand - Comments

I can actually clearly see that.. Besides, vampires can't have kids. So if she wanted someone more steady, he would actually be a good choice.. Just a thought anyways..

Is it wierd that i can totally picture her as that? lol

Woah, I really love this! I stayed up so late last night to read all of it. Can't wait for the next update!

Congratulations! A baby girl that's fantastic! ^^ hmm.. It's okay about the story, life clearly happened (no pun intended.. Really..) and after re-reading this, it was all fine. So Jenna's dead and Damon knows she wants him? Interesting. Hmm.. Good chapter.

I'm only one chapter in and I already love this. It's such a unique idea and I like that you're portraying Damon a bit softer; I quite like that side of him.

On to read more, but subed and recced. :)

It's going to be even more interesting? Awesome!! This is already really interesting so I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have planned for this. I wonder just what she's doing and his Damon will take her leaving as. Hmmm... Good chapter.

No problem. Take all the time you need, as long as this is active I don't mind waiting for updates. Another good chapter. Can't think of anything else to say at this moment.

Just picturing Damon sends me into a trance, haha.
You're writing this so well, I don't see mistake, so good job. c:

I didn't notice any mistakes, so I think you're good. I hope things in her mind will settle down soon. It seems like she just keeps stressing out. Good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more.

Ah posted too soon! Anyway what I what I was going to say is that sometimes you use 'their' instead of 'they're' and vice-versa and it's a really important thing to remember to get right! Otherwise it can be off-putting to readers who are grammar fanatics like me :P you also switched tenses a little bit, like at the bottom where you said ‘ I shrugged’ and then said ‘ he gestures’. It can be kinda confusing to switch around sometimes as readers get confused about which tense to use you know? Anyway I hope that helps a little bit or at least gives you something to think about when you’re writing! anyway I'm really loving your characterisation, I think Elena is really sweet and I loved how you revealed the whole thing about Bonnie's powers! I really want to see how it builds with Damon though and how all the things between them come to happen ! There was way too much tension between them to even bear, especially at the very end of the chapter, and I am a total tension addict :P I love the way you leave all these questions as far unanswered, like about who's a vampire and who isn't, and I'm like... I need answers now!!

Building the tension really well! I love how you described her reaction, so intense!

Hmm.. I think this is the reaction most expect after hearing all of that. It's also a nice change of pace after some of the other stories I've read. Good chapter and I can't wait for even more

Love this concept-- well-written and fluid. Some grammar points-- occasionally you put a full stop at the end of speech where there should be a comma. Keep it up!

Love it! Please keep it up!

This seems really good so far subscribing!

Haha yea.
Figured I'd leave this one off with a cliff hanger.
Won't be long till I update.
Probably tomorrow.

WHAT THE. You're leaving off like that?!
I'm going to be stirring, waiting for another update to see what happens, lol. D:

WOW... this is just... WOW. I absolutely LOVE this, dear! :D

WOW... this is just... WOW. I absolutely LOVE this, dear! :D

Thank you