I Can See The Person Through The Cigarette Smoke - Comments

:D I like it<3

I like this :) It's really good you should update it :)

Love it, and I would love it more if there was an update! :)

Aww, poor Ronnie D:
He's got no fwiends T.T
This is really good though, update soon!

1. The layout is really awesome. I love it. (:
2. You're really good at writing. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but not too many.
3. Update soon! I'd rally love to see what happens next!!
Xoxo ~N

Please update soon.

O.O omfg i need to read more dude

this is already so good! :D

please update I BEG YOU!

ASDFGHJKL UPDATE. :3 I love this idea.
And what magazine did you read about Ronnie's abusive stepmothers in? I haven't seen anything about that O.o

I LOVE IT WRITE MORE PLEASE!! i feel like i should slap that bitch for slapping my Ronnie! that cunt, And his father doesn't stick up for him, KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS OLD MAN AND PROTECT MY RONNIE DAMN YOU! >.< you must write more.

Continue!!!Continue!Continue and update, this bitch!!! There are so many things I enjoy about this story. I like how Ronnies dad does stuck up for him, just....Yeah. I don't know how to word anything right now. So