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  • TeamRadkeAllDay

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    :D I like it<3
    December 4th, 2012 at 03:28am
  • Max.Manson

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    I like this :) It's really good you should update it :)
    October 23rd, 2012 at 05:28am
  • tator

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    Love it, and I would love it more if there was an update! :)
    August 16th, 2012 at 09:04am
  • shinigamiroulette

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    Aww, poor Ronnie D:
    He's got no fwiends T.T
    This is really good though, update soon!
    June 2nd, 2012 at 04:37am
  • ilovemattgood1998

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    1. The layout is really awesome. I love it. (:
    2. You're really good at writing. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but not too many.
    3. Update soon! I'd rally love to see what happens next!!
    Xoxo ~N
    June 1st, 2012 at 10:57pm
  • Kita_Kioni

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    Please update soon.
    May 31st, 2012 at 10:43am
  • CreatureOfTheNight

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    O.O omfg i need to read more dude
    May 31st, 2012 at 07:08am
  • SlytherinCodyCarson

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    this is already so good! :D
    May 31st, 2012 at 06:06am
  • CreatureOfTheNight

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    please update I BEG YOU!
    May 31st, 2012 at 03:29am
  • shinigamiroulette

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    ASDFGHJKL UPDATE. :3 I love this idea.
    And what magazine did you read about Ronnie's abusive stepmothers in? I haven't seen anything about that O.o
    May 28th, 2012 at 10:13pm
  • CreatureOfTheNight

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    I LOVE IT WRITE MORE PLEASE!! i feel like i should slap that bitch for slapping my Ronnie! that cunt, And his father doesn't stick up for him, KEEP IT IN YOUR PANTS OLD MAN AND PROTECT MY RONNIE DAMN YOU! >.< you must write more.
    May 28th, 2012 at 03:30pm
  • UndeadPegasus

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    Continue!!!Continue!Continue and update, this bitch!!! There are so many things I enjoy about this story. I like how Ronnies dad does stuck up for him, just....Yeah. I don't know how to word anything right now. So Happy face
    May 28th, 2012 at 11:30am
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