fuCKYou - Comments

You're really good!!! The story has good grammar, it is very well paced, and the characters have depth.

WOW really, really well written. I love the layout, description, everything! I am so jealous of Indigo's name and hair. Her mother sounds horrible. I like how you made it so realistic. One thing I would change is the title. I just don't think it goes with such a beautifully written story. Well done and keep writing

WOW really, really well written. I love the layout, description, everything! I am so jealous of Indigo's name and hair. Her mother sounds horrible. I like how you made it so realistic. One thing I would change is the title. I just don't think it goes with such a beautifully written story. Well done and keep writing

WOW really, really well written. I love the layout, description, everything! I am so jealous of Indigo's name and hair. Her mother sounds horrible. I like how you made it so realistic. One thing I would change is the title. I just don't think it goes with such a beautifully written story. Well done and keep writing

Woah I really like this story! Everything is well written (minus a few grammar and sentence mistakes) and relatable! I love how you make the characters seem like real, legitimate people with legitimate situations surrounding them. Great Job! I definitely enjoyed reading this. <3 Keep writing, you do a very good job of doing so.

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First off, I liked the layout. I can't really describe why haha I just think it fits well with the tone of the story. I like how the characters home life is more realistic than most stories. There are many kids out there with parents who fight and argue so people can relate to this story more than others. I recommed rereading your story before posting it though. There are a few sentences which seem like it could be a run on, and there are a few grammar mistakes. But other than that I like it!

I can't wait for more update soon

omg i love this! keep up the good work!

<3 it!

please update very sooon!!!!

please update!!!

I agree with kaylakelly49. I hope Bam and Indigo get together. :)

this is so good! please update right away! i love storys about bam being younger, this one is so good, i hope bam and indigo get together!!

Oh my God. This is just priceless!!!

ughhh what the fuckk. i just started getting into this story.
i wonder if Bam would be her knight and shining armor when her parents attack. hmm :D
write more soon!
and by soon, i mean now.

Ohmygod, Vic. Vic. I love you. This story. Is still so amazing. I remember when you came up with the idea for it and decided to use my name. Omqit'sstillsoamazing. I love it so much. To be honest. words can not describe.

I absolutely love this. Please update soon. <3

ok well still cant wait for more of the story

cant wait for jackass guys to be in the story want me some party boy!!

Great story I Love what you've written.
Please contiune to write this story.
Also update soon.