fuCKYou - Comments

Where can I begin? The story is goddamn awesome! It simply develops naturally in my head, I mean.. I picture everything is happening without any doubts about the elements in the text.
I gotta say I wasn't expecting that much so I really am surprised and thrilled about the story! The one thing I loved most is Indigo's strength and resilience, I mean, she's in a tough situation everyday dealing with a volatile mother and and an absent dad (so far it's what I understood, I really apologize if I got that wrong), but she still manages to wake up and live like nothing bad ever happens (though she has her own way of coping I suppose). She deals with prejudice and I think she does it in an awesome way being happy about her body. You're really quite a writer, Victoria. There's pretty much of a beautiful heart in there and I feel moved by the characters so far described. Looking forward to your other writings.

totally loving the name at first i was like wtf cky and then im like hell yes cky (saw them earlier this year, bam made an appearance it was epic). I love any bam story and this is bam in high school (new for me) but im liking it and you the way you leave chapter 5 you know he is up to something. so please update again soon i really like this :)

Wow for starters I was kinda indifferent with the name but now since I read it it's AWESOME!! I love bam he awesome at skating anyway, but tony hawk will always be my favorite. :). They kinda remind me of jack ass. LoL.

Indigo love the name very unique in so many ways. Low how you discribe also. Well done with the story and I think the storyline is good also. Update soon ok and I subscribed.

This is from the comment swap thingy btw. :):)

This is really good! The storyline is really good. Indigo seems like the kind of girl i would like to hang out with haha. Great job with the story! Keep up the good work because you have a real talent and the story is amazing. The layout is simple and fits the story really well. Good job :)

Found this through comment swap. First of I gotta say that your language and writing style really suits the story. It seems kinda casual without lacking good description. And your characters are really great. Even from the beginning Indigo seems to be a unique girl. And the boys are crazy and weird. x3 Really great job! Keep it up! :)

Cherries! xx

So far I really like this story. Indigo is a unique name to use~ I really like it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

~NN

I come bearing a review from comment swap :) So, I really like the name Indigo, its very unique. You character is very realistic to me because I can relate to how she feels with all the fighting in her house. I think you've Bam and the Jackass/Viva La Bam crew down to a T too. So, keep up the good work! :)

So, I was brought here through comment swap.

This seems interesting. Not my type of story, but interesting nonetheless. I've never listened to CKY, and have only ever heard of Bam. Anyways, good luck. ^_^

Your writing is fantastic and very descriptive as well which I absolutely love, I could picture what was happening in my head and I could follow the story line easily. Your spelling and grammar don't need fixing or changing which is nice, but I would suggest to have a summary so people know the character's and what the story is going to be based on which is CKY obviously. You describe the character's well so I know what they look like, good work.

I think there could have been more to the summary to actually draw people in. I don't even really know what kind of story this is. Only thing I can guess is a CKY story? Well that was kind of obvious, lol. Anyway focusing on the content of the story it was really good. You are very descriptive and it's not all centered around dialog which is amazing. I didn't notice any mistakes, which I'm the worst at noticing in the first place. Keep up to good work. :)

Well, she has been properly warned.
I love Bam, What room is yours? I'll see you later....

Haha. Update soon, 'cause I love this!

Ahaha! I love it! XD

Next chapter plz

I love this so much!!!!!!!!!

I really like this story!! this definitely has something that a lot of stories lack : detail. detail can make a story so much better, in my opinion (probably a lot of people's opinions! Lol!)
I like how there's detail in all her thoughts, and I like how the characters are well developed. and I know that when I feel emotions for a fictional character (*cough* that stupid bitch mother *cough*) that I'm reading a good story!!!!!
and, I thought the title was pretty cool, just thought you'd want to know :-)
so pretty please, keep up the good work and update often because this is awesome!!!! :-)

My commenting skills are powerful, no? Lol. Anyways! I enjoyed the new chapter. Quality time with the boys is always a good time. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

the mother is a bitch... just sayen... i love love love this story :) hope you'll update soon :)

Wow, everything got real in the last chapter. I'm kind of a Bam story addict. So I hope you keep updating this, because I'm loving the story so far!

I like it. I haven't read anything this... addictive in a while! you see that little button in the top right and corner? the one inbetween report and recommend? well that's getting pushed. I like the fact that the descriptions of her life are detailed but I think the summary needs to be more relative to the story. Kind of introducing the characters maybe? Anyway. That's my only criticism. Time for you to get writing!

I'm actually liking this story more and more. The title had at first put me off, until I had realized that part of it was holding his bands' name which I thought was awesome. The descriptions of her family life are perfectly detailed and how she reacts to it as well. Kinda surprised what with this being a Bam story (is it?) that it would've had more comments. Can't wait to read the next chapter.