March 23rd, 2013 at 06:35am
You write really very well. I enjoyed it a lot.
Is it complete yet?
Is this story fan fiction? Well, I guess it is.
I wasn't quite getting what you mean to tell in the first few paragraphs, BUT, you are just an amazing writer!
You can truly feel for the poor kid, she's been cursed with a malformed face and is bullies for it.
The personalities and descriptions are top notch and very well written story, I like ^.^