Father Lucifer - Comments

Nice story, I like, really captures the mind. I know a little about Norse mythology, but nothing about Thor the comic of in the movie. I was more of the superman fan. lol.

You can truly feel for the poor kid, she's been cursed with a malformed face and is bullies for it.

The personalities and descriptions are top notch and very well written story, I like ^.^

You write really very well. I enjoyed it a lot.
Is it complete yet?
Is this story fan fiction? Well, I guess it is.

I wasn't quite getting what you mean to tell in the first few paragraphs, BUT, you are just an amazing writer!

This is definitely a story that I wouldn't normally read, but I enjoyed it! I have no idea about where you got the plot and what it's based on, but it's still a wonderful story! That just shows how good of a writer you are!

This was good, I enjoyed it. I thought you described your characters well, I don't know anything about what this story is based around but I liked it anyway. I'm glad I found this through comment swap. I really did like reading it.

This was interesting. I really enjoyed it even though it's not something I'd normally read. I really liked the dialogue and your character descriptions. They're very in-depth and very close to the real life dealio.

This is so tragic! First of all, your descriptions are lovely! The way you described the characters face melting away was awesome! Second, I really feel for your characters and third, I freaking love the name Frigga. That’s awesome! I was a little confused at first and some parts are hard to follow, but I think you have a good idea!

I feel so sorry for little Hela! And I love how you portray Loki as a father, adorable!