Looking After You - Comments

I don't know why you don't like this chapter. I think it's really great. You use so much imagery in your chapters and it makes it feel like I'm right there with James.

It was so sweet how he laid down next to Andy at the end. It was so cute. I hope the chapter aren't so sad in the future, but I understand why they have to be now.

There's a couple of grammatical mistakes in your chapter, but I had to hunt to find them, so it's not a big deal at all.

I'm excited to read your next chapter.

Ack sorry I just got that those were signifying thoughts so sorry good day to you!

I recommended!

Ack sorry I just got that those were signifying thoughts so sorry good day to you!

I recommended!

Beautiful and that might mean a lot coming from me. It raised emotions in me that I have not felt in a while. The characters are outstanding and the concept is great. That was the part that I liked but I must be the grammar police, dialog remember punctuation inside of quotation marks and remember to use a proper quotation mark (" not '). Other than that this story is superb and I would love for it to be continued soon.

Damn it, Alec. Don't you know you're not supposed to make me cry? But really, I loved it. :D

I honestly can't think of a single thing I would change. You added a lot of great detail that made everything so believable. I loved the way you wrote Andy's grief (even though it made my cry) and I feel like I already know him. It's really awesome when a character already feels so real that it's like I could go walking down the street and meet him, which is what you've done with Andy.

I'm looking forward to seeing what James is like and seeing what happens next.

I love what was written so far. Very impressing about time I found something brillent on this site!!!! well Done Please Update again AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!

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I love what was written so far. Very impressing about time I found something brillent on this site!!!! well Done Please Update again AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!

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Omgomg this so amazing! I love it already, everything is so detailed and perfectly written! Great job! :)