Four Weeks to Live - Comments

I like your style of writing, but the chapters are too short for me, personally. Maybe make two chapters into one larger chapter? The title was very intriguing, it drew me in straight away, as well as your summary. I find that these are key to a successful story on Mibba. I really liked the concept, the language you used created suspense and made for a very gripping read. Your description was also very good, but some things could have been described in more detail.

I really enjoyed the hunger games, but I haven't read a fan fiction before and I really enjoyed this!

Awe I really loved how you ended it. Really it was the perfect ending for it. :)

All I have to say is wow. That was one intense chapter.

Awe I loved that last chapter, so cute. :)

Love it. :)

I really like this story, I can't wait to read more. :)

I was really looking forward to reading your story, honestly, but I can't read anything with that layout? Is this purposeful, or just an accident? Sadly, my computer doesn't allow me to choose a default layout, so I really can't read anything.

You might just want to take a look yourself if you weren't aware of it.

Comment Swap..
Where are the chapter titles? Haha, no biggie I figured it out after... a few minutes. Not a huge thing for me I genrally look past the layout unless it messes with my eyes. I love the hunger games- only saw the movie though. I intend on reading the books but as of right now all I need if your story to continue! I love it. Good work!

I really love your writing style. Like said below, the paragraphs are really long, which makes me loose interest:/ The words are really easy to read, which i really like. Keep writing this! Its really good!

First, your story layout takes a while to load and the chapter titles seem to be transparent.
But oh my goodness, as soon as I read Hunger Games I was hooked!
I like your style of writing, and I must say it's making me want to start a Hunger Games fic myself.
The only thing I would advice to you is spacing; it kind of gets hard to read such long paragraphs after while. Hope that helps.
This is very good, keep it up.

-Jess xx

First, your story layout takes a while to load and the chapter titles seem to be transparent.
But oh my goodness, as soon as I read Hunger Games I was hooked!
I like your style of writing, and I must say it's making me want to start a Hunger Games fic myself.
The only thing I would advice to you is spacing; it kind of gets hard to read such long paragraphs after while. Hope that helps.
This is very good, keep it up.

-Jess xx

two: Just realized that not much is said about their mentor (along the terms of name wise) besides that he's a morphling. Liked the small conversation between her and Moss. Descriptions in this were great as well, but might still want to go back to this one as well and space it out. Can't wait to read the next chapter whenever it gets posted.

well, this is actually my second Hunger Games- comment swap. Descriptions were great. I instantly disliked the Lovage character because she reminded me so much (or at least in "cheerful" aspect) to that of the lady in the Hunger Games novel. Might however want to think about spacing this story out somewhat as well. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Okay, this is a bit awkward as comment swap brought me here.

It seems that I can't access your chapters. So, I can't really write a meaningful comment as umm, there's nothing to read about...

You want to take another look at this again before putting it up for comment swap? Just out of curiousity, what is this fanfic about?