September 23rd, 2013 at 07:12pm
Four Weeks to Live - Comments
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Awe I really loved how you ended it. Really it was the perfect ending for it. :)October 24th, 2012 at 05:15am
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All I have to say is wow. That was one intense chapter.October 15th, 2012 at 02:31am
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Awe I loved that last chapter, so cute. :)October 11th, 2012 at 03:08am
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Love it. :)August 20th, 2012 at 04:31am
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I really like this story, I can't wait to read more. :)August 1st, 2012 at 09:32pm
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I was really looking forward to reading your story, honestly, but I can't read anything with that layout? Is this purposeful, or just an accident? Sadly, my computer doesn't allow me to choose a default layout, so I really can't read anything.
You might just want to take a look yourself if you weren't aware of it.July 19th, 2012 at 02:12pm -
Comment Swap..
Where are the chapter titles? Haha, no biggie I figured it out after... a few minutes. Not a huge thing for me I genrally look past the layout unless it messes with my eyes. I love the hunger games- only saw the movie though. I intend on reading the books but as of right now all I need if your story to continue! I love it. Good work!July 10th, 2012 at 02:12am -
I really love your writing style. Like said below, the paragraphs are really long, which makes me loose interest:/ The words are really easy to read, which i really like. Keep writing this! Its really good!July 9th, 2012 at 07:07am
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First, your story layout takes a while to load and the chapter titles seem to be transparent.
But oh my goodness, as soon as I read Hunger Games I was hooked!
I like your style of writing, and I must say it's making me want to start a Hunger Games fic myself.
The only thing I would advice to you is spacing; it kind of gets hard to read such long paragraphs after while. Hope that helps.
This is very good, keep it up.
-Jess xxJune 12th, 2012 at 04:00am -
First, your story layout takes a while to load and the chapter titles seem to be transparent.
But oh my goodness, as soon as I read Hunger Games I was hooked!
I like your style of writing, and I must say it's making me want to start a Hunger Games fic myself.
The only thing I would advice to you is spacing; it kind of gets hard to read such long paragraphs after while. Hope that helps.
This is very good, keep it up.
-Jess xxJune 12th, 2012 at 04:00am -
two: Just realized that not much is said about their mentor (along the terms of name wise) besides that he's a morphling. Liked the small conversation between her and Moss. Descriptions in this were great as well, but might still want to go back to this one as well and space it out. Can't wait to read the next chapter whenever it gets posted.June 7th, 2012 at 11:53pm
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well, this is actually my second Hunger Games- comment swap. Descriptions were great. I instantly disliked the Lovage character because she reminded me so much (or at least in "cheerful" aspect) to that of the lady in the Hunger Games novel. Might however want to think about spacing this story out somewhat as well. Can't wait to read the next chapter.June 7th, 2012 at 11:47pm
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Okay, this is a bit awkward as comment swap brought me here.
It seems that I can't access your chapters. So, I can't really write a meaningful comment as umm, there's nothing to read about...
You want to take another look at this again before putting it up for comment swap? Just out of curiousity, what is this fanfic about?June 7th, 2012 at 05:13am
I really enjoyed the hunger games, but I haven't read a fan fiction before and I really enjoyed this!