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  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    Just got done with this, cheering at the good parts, booing at the assholes and crying along with kassidy
    June 4th, 2014 at 07:41am
  • Smoothies

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    I like the way the story is told. The tone is serious yet light enough to be real. However, I do see some repetition that could be changed with different word choices, but it's not a huge deal. The descriptions are very unique and some phrases are a bit awkward, but I like the overall flow of the story.
    June 1st, 2013 at 06:34am
  • valgera

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    Omg!!i freakin love this story. Omg tragic!! Plz lz update soon!! Mr. Green
    January 9th, 2013 at 11:06am
  • kaleidoscop3eyes.

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    SO GOOD. OMFG. Sean and Kassidy should be together! Mr. Green
    December 7th, 2012 at 01:52am
  • brownskinnedbeaut

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    This is really good, please don't kill Sean. I love him too much. Let him fall in love with someone else
    December 6th, 2012 at 11:12pm
  • random.ninja

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    This is really good! Update por favor
    December 6th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Damn it, Sean has to b ok. Kassidy is goin through enough feeling guilty and hurt she doesn't need to find out her best friend is dead. It'll b bad enough she finds out he was in a car accident
    December 5th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    Tina learn to keep yo holes closed unless necessary!
    October 17th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • AshleyVC88

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    Nae, I swear I will die if they break up! They are too perfect together!!
    October 15th, 2012 at 02:48pm
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Let them please stay together
    October 15th, 2012 at 07:45am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    Ain't that about a bitch
    October 15th, 2012 at 07:40am
  • hellobloo

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    Tina is g-r-o-s-s.
    October 15th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • blaqrican13

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    Finally! More soon please
    October 15th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • AshleyVC88

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    Tina needs to go the f on somewhere. Because I'm for real gonna cut a fictional character if she messes this up!
    October 15th, 2012 at 04:45am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Whoa. That Tina woman is in-fucking-sane. Wow
    She sucks.

    I love Jackson and Kassidy Mr. Green
    October 15th, 2012 at 04:21am
  • brownskinnedbeaut

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    This is wonderful, I cannot get enough of this!
    October 9th, 2012 at 05:04am
  • Hazzer123

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    This is great! I only read the first chapter, but I'll definitely come back to this! I really want to know what will happen between Jackson and Kassidy. The only thing I would say is there were a few grammar/spelling mistakes I spotted (can't remember them now) and there may have been a small tense mix up, but they can be solved when you edit, of course :) Good job x
    October 3rd, 2012 at 07:56pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    lol, I fucking don't like this Tina bitch at all. Jackson, can I love you with all of my heart. You to sean, just let me love you both. And Kassidy you too, you know what, let me love you all (:
    September 18th, 2012 at 06:18am
  • ariesgirl

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    Sean need to let it go. He had ample opportunity to be in a serious committed relationship with Kassidy but he would rather sleep around. I don't think Jackson will have a problem with going to visit Kassidy's dad.
    September 18th, 2012 at 01:58am
  • CaliCupcakeMonster

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    That chapter was just plain awesome lol!
    September 17th, 2012 at 06:20pm
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