Missed Connection - Comments

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Okay...back to reading. :)

Fabulous chapter as usual~ Whatever you are going through at the moment stay strong :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter. Lol Jackson needs to get his next few moves into motion, it pains me to see all the desire he has for Kassidy and no to anything.

love it <3

Wow, I love it. I am susbcribed :)

I've only read two chapters and I already LOVE it!

First part I loved and if he waits any longer his gonna cause serious case of blue balls lol

Haha I saw Madea Friday. It was packed and there were more white people than I thought there would be. It was awesome! Keep up the good work, i absolutely adore this story.

This chapter is cute, can't wait to see if she teaches him some other things..

They are so cute together, Great chapter

Love this update !

One of the most enthralling things i've read...probably ever. You are really talented, especially with the imagery!

This is incredible. I agree with Jaquie! on Jackson's POV and how its up front and all. So far in my browsing of mibba, I have not came upon a story with a plot such as this one. Very refreshing. Can't wait to see how the conflict between Jackson and Sun-Sean unfolds. Please give us another chapter soon.

Oh god, this is fantastic. Damn you, and your skills as a writer. I have to say, this is the first story I've come across on this Comment Swap thing that I actually wanted to continue reading. While the other people say you need more details, I kind of like how Jackson's POV was kind of short and to the point. He didn't have much to think about when he was away fighting, but as he comes home, he grows. I personally like it.

This is really good. I agree with Elizabeth_Hurst when they say you need a little bit more detail. I really Like how the characters are connectable. I think the story is going to be really good. I really can't wait to read more. i'll be waiting for that emial ~Subscribed

So, I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm already freaking in love with this story. The one thing I would suggest is to add just a tiny bit more detail to some of your paragraphs. Some of them are bordering on the too little line. Consider me a subscriber of this story from here on out! Keep writing for I can not wait to read the next update!

Comment swap sent me here, but I can't be happier that it sent me here. I fell in love with this story as soon as I started reading it. :) I love love love it. I'm very impressed with your work. Keep up the good work! :D

I love that...

definitely need more chapters asap ...love it

I think things are going to get very complicated soon
Can't wait to are what happens!

I'm so excited to see what happens with Kassidy and Jackson now!