Look to the Skies - Comments

Hi. I left a comment about a year ago saying that you had 24 hours to update or I would cuss....well clearly it's been more than 24 hours, but I would still like an update!!!

I love this! I cannot wait for you to update!

Love this!

OH MY GOD... okay I think I know what Nathan is... Love this story :D

Comment Swap:

I'm not really a fan of The Wanted or Nathan Sykes, but that didn't really have an impact on your story to me. I thought it was really well written and the story line was likeable. As to grammar and spelling, there was only a few errors, which I am entirely too lazy to point out, but that doesn't really matter...Okay I'm rambling now, but continue writing :)

I'm giving you 24 hours to update this or I WILL cuss.

Comment swap:

So, I have to start out by saying that I have no idea who Nathan Sykes or The Wanted is. However, that being said I did enjoy these first five chapters. They are very well written, and I saw only a few errors such as improper verb tenses and such. I didn't fully understand what was going on with Nathan and why being around Marin was "dangerous" for him, but I'm not sure if that's because I'm not part of the fandom or if it's a plot point you have yet to reveal. Over all, it was a well written and interesting story.

Oh my this is wonderful. The first chapter really didn't peak my interest that much, but I was determined to carry on. The summary told me that this story had a lot of potential and is in fact quite interesting.

And I was right. By the second chapter I was hooked, and I was interested to find out why those guys were watching her like that when she obviously didn't know them. I was literally on the edge of my seat. This is good work, keep it up :)

I love this! Nathan is ahh.. Okay so I won't get started on that, but anywho love, love, love this. Can't wait for more.

So, i'm not a really big The Wanted fan, but i have to say this story is quite good. Definitely subscribed for more. Comment Swap brought me here and i pretty glad it did, keep up the good work :) And please try and update soon, I want to see what happens next!
-Steph xx

So not much on fan fiction :) :D "I look at you and it hurts. I look at you and think about what I no longer can have. I see the clouds and skies and sunlight and daytime. I just want to touch you and it's so tempting.".... FAVORITE QUOTE :D I would also like to say I loved your sense in characters. You used them to enhanced your story in away that compliments how its twisting and turning :D Good work!

"I look at you and it hurts. I look at you and think about what I no longer can have. I see the clouds and skies and sunlight and daytime. I just want to touch you and it's so tempting.".... I Loved that!.. I love the plot and I'm totally recommending this!

via comment swap. ;D

I really like the way you made the guy act in the second chapter. Because guys are like that. Guys are totally like that. (Not being sarcastic.) We're jerkoffs half the time when everyone wants to believe that we're God's gift to women. (From what I've seen, anyway.) I'm proud to say I'm not like that. But a lot of guys are. Ego trips and all that. You know. D; So good job for writing that true to what it should be. It's too short to tell much right now, but I'm sure it's going to turn out great. <3 And it's okay that you're unsatisfied with the end result. That's the mark of a good writer, I would think. It's like faith. You're supposed to doubt. Or else it's not really faith. Same with writing. Writers doubt themselves all the time. ;3 <3

i'll be honest i never read a wanted story, but my friends been pushing them on me so i thought what the hell plus, the comment swap brought me here so I was lucky.
I really enjoy your writing style, it's very easy to imagine everything you're describing, because you describe everything in detail, which is very difficult to find sometimes.

soo keep it up!! :3

I was taken here by Comment Swap (:

Sounds interesting! It is a good start, it is catchy and makes the reader want to know more! Even though it sounds a little bit cliched, I think your writing style can pull it off. We all need cliches in our lives, anyways (: Good work and cannot wait to read more!

PS: I wrote these and I am not a the Wanted fan. I think it shows the power of your writing style (:

Can't wait to read more (:

Oh dang, what is up with those guys? Update when you can! You have such a great writing style. :)

Wow this is really good. I love your writing style and I can't wait for the next update. I'm really not a massive fan of The Wanted (comment swap brought me here), but I really want to know what's going on and where this is going. I'm totally hooked.

This is really good, I was sent here through Comment Swap and I thought it was brilliant. I use to be a fan of The Wanted but then I started becoming a fan of rock and my love for them slowly faded, I'd be lying if I said that I don't still adore them and love the first Album... and that I still don't have a crush on Max. You should carry on writing and uldate as soon as possible please, because you love me!

i love this!!!!!

please, please, PLEASE update soon!
I'm overly excited to see where this goes!