Messy Ending - Comments

Aw please update soon, I need to see who this chick is!!!!

Ohhhh man. Please don't wait til next month to update I wanna see what happens.

shit just got real....

* i mean I love their relationship

* i mean I love their relationship

u fucking love their relationship! Ben and Dai are so cute together

i freaking love this story!

i freaking love this story!

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omg I love this so much, please update :D

Ugh I love this story so much!

I'm here from my mibbaween bowl and I only read chapter one. An editing tip I have to give you is be careful with your use of the word 'had' sometimes its great and other times it makes the sentence sound weird. You have in the beginning, "I had met Ben at the signing..." You don't need had in that sentence at all. Other than that there was like one spelling mistake and a tiny grammar thing that can be easily over looked since your story line is well written.

I like that you have Daidara being different from most fan girls. I appreciate the fact that she doesn't do casual sex like most random girls. She's relatable and a very well rounded character which is saying something since I only read 1 chapter. I look forward to reading more.

Here's your mibbaween treat!

First off, I love Asking Alexandria! They're just amazing. And Ben? Perfection. Lol.

Second, just from reading the first chapter, I can tell what you've got is an incredibly interesting story. I love the amount of description you gave in just one chapter, especially when you detailed different things about Dai's life. And speaking of Dai, I just love the name Daidara. I've never even heard it before but it's so pretty.

Overall, what you've got here seems really unique, especially considering I've pretty much sworn off reading bandfics because of the lack of originality. I think once I'm finished with my other mibbaween treats, I'm definitely going to come back to this and finish reading.

Great job with this. I can't wait to read more!

I'm in love with tho story! Only found it a couple of hours ago but sped through it! Can't wait to see what happens especially when Ali returns. :) keep up the great work!

It's so cute and very well written! :) one of the best story's I've read!!!<3

Loved it!

I agree with the comment below me. xD My favorite chapter thus far. c:

MORE MORE MORE. I almost screamed of excitement when I saw you updated. Bring what's-her-face back in the next one... PLEASEEE. (:
I really want to see how that turns out!

MORE MORE MORE. I almost screamed of excitement when I saw you updated. Bring what's-her-face back in the next one... PLEASEEE. (:
I really want to see how that turns out!

I teared up some when Ben told Dai he loved her. (': I love the update. :3

Loving this<3