Is It The Way That You Talk? - Comments

That was sexy!

Your layout is so cool for this story ~ I haven't quite figured out the layout thing yet but I hope to soon. :3 It matches the story well. ^.^ It's a really good story and from the other comments I've read it's only a one-shot? Man I'm so disappointed I wanted to read more. ~

First; I love your layout and how it fit in the story.
Second; The story was just great, the way you wrote it was interesting and clean cut. It always kept you interested and pulled into the world that was San Franisco. Very nicely done!

Comment swap led me here.
I think your banner is lovely, for a start.
I really really loved this, and its not usual for me to like anything related to My Chemical Romance, so it was a nice surprise. Your writing is excellent and I love your descriptions. Like many people have said before me, I'm sad this is only a one shot! It's really an excellent piece. Good job!

Whyy did something so amazing have to be only a one shot?!

Aww kinda mad it's a one shot

Loved it <3

Loved it <3

Loved it <3

I can't even tell you how much I loved this! XD

(I was too lazy to pay attention to any mistake..... Heh, I don't think there were mistakes anyway. Not that I was supposed to beta it or something but ugh, whatever.)

(I was too lazy to pay attention to any mistake..... Heh, I don't think there were mistakes anyway. Not that I was supposed to beta it or something but ugh, whatever.)

AMAZING.

Okay I'm a huge fan of My chemical romance, I just don't like reading slash story's... it's just not my thing. I'm only here because of comment swap so don't hate me for not reading your story.

I like you banner, it's simple. so yeah just trying to make this long anuff so Mibba wont be a bitch and make me comment again.

I do know some people that read slash story so I will tell them about this to make up to the fact that I'm not reading it... again don't hate me.

Keep writing.

That was intense. I quite enjoyed reading it and I like how it seems to flow. The dialogue ws great and you're a good writer, and I liked how descriptive you are and used proper grammar, which most people seem to neglect sometimes. :)

Holy shit. God that was just so sexy its not even funny. I want NEED more of this! Btw i'm stealing your comment v-card. MUWAHAHAHA!!! I love your writing style btw....again. XD

holy eff that was hot. i loved it!

DAYHUM! ThAt WaS hOt, BrO ;o)

This was like amazing! Ugh so fucking hot! No fucking words. This should totally be a story just saying :) <3

ndjghioerjgpsdovnksdnwprig. nnnnnnnnpppmh. that was hot.