Oh god. The tension is KILLING ME. I want Sparrow to tell John SO BADLY and I want her to figure out how to leave Cameron SO BADLY and aughhhhhh please update SOON!!!!
This is such a good story! I read the first few chapters awhile back and subscribed .... Never got the update emails so re-read it from the start again! Such s good story!!
Dang it Daniel! Sparrow was so close to telling John the truth! John needs to find out and better not stop bugging Sparrow until she finally tells him.
ugh, so close. i really hope that shadow was jake and he does SOMETHING about cameron because this is getting way out of hand. i also hope john and sparrow will stop being so stubborn already and just confess their attraction haha urgh.
I hope Jake saw what Cameron did to Sparrow and confronts her about it or tells someone else about it. Sparrow needs to get away from Cameron before he beats her so badly that she ends up in te hospital or worse....
So I just started this story today and I finished all the chapters in one sitting...haha. It's fair to say that I'm now unhealthily addicted to your writing and would love to read more. PLEASE update soon. :D:D
so i was away for like a good week and a half and you updated 4 times and i am so happy haha. charlie is a skank and i hate her, john is a dick but i mean like...i guess i can kinda understand why he does what he does. i love the way you wrote about how sparrow realizes she won't ever love cameron it was actually great. my favorite part of the chapter by far. i really hope thats the kick in the ass she needs to leave him cuz its not fair to her to be stuck like that. my heart goes out to her
Sparrow is right about her relationship with Cameron...she won't be able to get out alone, and that's why she needs to tell someone! I would say she should tell John but he has his own problems plus they're in a fight so I think she should tell Allen and her parents. Whatever she does, she needs to get out.