November 15th, 2017 at 03:40am
Comment swap sent me here and I was not expecting to be sent on a feel trip, oh my!
I love this, it's so raw and real, the emotion is so strong. The type of wording you use is very simple, which is actually very good in this story because it creates an impact, anyone can understand the raw emotion behind it, there is no need for pretty wording to convey your message.
I recommended!
This story pulled at my heart strings in more ways than one. Great work!