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  • Fandango

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    The POV changes were really screwing with me. But once I got a handle on that, I really enjoyed this. Your language is incredibly emotive.

    I don't usually like songfics. I feel they distract from the story. However, I've never seen someone do it the way you have.

    Keep writing!!
    September 23rd, 2012 at 02:46pm
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