The Curse of a Vampire - Comments

I love your storryy its amazing <3 update soon<3

I must say that I am a sucker for a good vampire story. I must say that I loved the summary, and the "The Curse of a Vampire" was actually very clever and fitting. I must say that you have excellent word choice. I also love. love the layout. I might disagree with the others in saying that I kind of liked the mystery of whose dream it was. I will defiantly continue to read this.

I'm not really one for vampire stores, to say the least i'm a little disappointed that mibba would suggest this as a story for me to read. I never really got on that whole vampire bandwagon. But none the less your story was interesting and but a little confusing right off the bat, maybe a little introduction first would have helped like onexlookxcanxkill was saying.

The first chapter is a little confusing who had the dream? the boy or the girl? I cannot tell.The lay out is nice. and when you paint a scene you describe quite nicely. I saw a few grammar errors but nothing too bad to fret about. I cant believe I'm the first to comment though. All in all I do like it. Good job and have a wonderful day :)