Together. - Comments

I honestly am so pissed off that this is a one and done sort of thing because I want to see more progression, but I'm also so glad that it is a one and gloriously done thing because it was perfectly submitted. If that made any sort of sense.

I liked it anyway.

Emma

CONTEST JUDGEMENT:
This was a very odd idea, but an interesting and definitely enjoyable one! From the contents page I was hooked, and was curious to find out more about Balint, one of the most confusing character I've ever read about. The plot was well developed and I like your writing style.
There were a few spelling mistakes, but nothing too drastic, just a few swapped letters or two. I like how you put the definition of an obsession at the beginning- a nice touch, so ticks from me!
I'll be marking this out of 50, but your score will be released when I post the winners up- I can't want to find out how you do in my contest!
The layout was nice (awesome picture, by the way!) and I have a soft spot for Sevilen- and I don't know why!

Thank you for writing such a great story! :]

omg I like it pls update man k

I like it.
More soon please ? (:
<3