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  • angelbyyourside

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    Yes. Brian's. Hahaha. :)
    July 1st, 2013 at 10:32am
  • VRose

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    Thanks for the suggestion. It's just that when I transfer the chapter it automatically adjusts that way, but now I've repaired that =) Hope you're enjoying the story
    July 8th, 2012 at 04:58pm
  • Somehow.Saving.You

    Somehow.Saving.You (100)

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    You need proper paragraphs. Your writing is just in one huge block and it's really hard for readers to get through them. Trust me, space out your writing and you will get a lot more readers :D
    July 8th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    Cantvwait for your update
    June 15th, 2012 at 10:50pm
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