Some Nights - Comments

We’ve all pinned for the one we lost, and you did such a great job detailing Brendons heart ache and grief! I also enjoyed how the song lyrics tied into the paragraph, and reallly set the tone!

Very well written and good choice of song!

Very well written and it sucked me right in

The banner for this is gorgeous. Brendon Urie is one beautiful specimen of man, I must say!

As you can already tell, I'm a Panic! fan and I'm delighted that you've chosen to use him and one of my favourite songs of the moment in this. Your writing is near-flawless, seriously. I love how you've incorporated the lines of the song throughout, from when Brendon is drowning in his own self-pity to when Alice is in Brendon's apartment. I like that they both have so much in common. I don't believe in destiny or anything like that, but it seemed that the pair were destined to find each other and help with the healing process, not just for Brendon but for Alice too. I like that about this story, and I liked reading it. It almost felt like a tiny little snapshot into one unusual night of Brendon's existence, and it was really lovely. You've got a really nice message coming across in this as well - it's okay to not know where you're going. I like that.

I'll be announcing the winners of the contest shortly, so good luck!

Contest:
Ahhh you paired my two favorite things: Brendon Urie and fun. :D And let me say you did an amazing job! I loved the story, and how you incorporated lyrics into it. It fit the song pretty well. I liked Alice, and I would be interested in reading a sequel if you decide to continue :)

This is awesome, full of little descriptive details and I could feel the emotion in it. Great stuff c: I like the song and how you inserted lines of the lyrics. This is different to most stuff I read on here. Great connection between characters! AWESOME WORK ^-^

DUDE. THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING. WHAT THE FUCK. You are so going to win the contest. I do not know what I am doing entering now. Whatever I'll still turn in my crappy middle school type piece. xD BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS SOOOO GOOD.

I don't even know where to begin with this comment. I just....I LOVED THIS. You're writing is absolutely amazing and I don't think there were any grammar errors. It all flowed so perfectly and I really felt what the characters were feeling. Brilliant work!

Firstly; you mixed my two favourite things into a one shot – Brendon Urie and fun. I cannot thank you enough for that. Secondly, you’re writing is absolutely FLAWLESS, from your paragraphing to your grammar to your character development. It was just perfect, it really was : )

Ahhhh! Another awesome story! This is the second one I read by you tonight. I think you have me hooked. I defintely want to check out what other precious gems you have hidden. You have a fantastic style that just brings things to life, something a lot of people don't seem to take their time with anymore. Great story :)

*goes off to scroll through other things you've written*

i really enjoyed this. i liked how you incorporated the lyrics into the story (which, i'm not sure if the contest you entered this in assigned you a certain song, but i felt like you did really well forming a story around it)! sad seeing (reading) something regarding brendon like this, omg. but, it was great, as was your writing. <3

This is fantastic! You write really, really well. I really like how you've written this and I would love to read one (or more) of your stories to see how your writing progresses! Keep up the good work and good luck for this contest, this is a worthy winner for sure! :)