Fool - Comments

This is gorgeous. I know completely what you're talking about. I love the author's note of "overthinking and stuff" because I find myself notorious for the same. Relationships are shit, you know? They can be great and the can be awful, and its truly terrifying when you find yourself wondering 'what if.' Most people can relate, and for that, I applaud you. This is wonderful writing.

This is amazing. I can completley relate and I understand whats happening entirely. Very nicely written. Good paragraph spacing, and I didn't see any mistakes in punctuation or grammar. Very nice.

The layout is easy to read and fits well with the story, you did an exquisite job. Keep writing :)

Oh my gosh, this is beautiful and sad and wow <3