Rope - Comments

Ah, this really caught my interest. I like your flow of sentences but sometimes they get cut off with the word "also". From what I can see, I believe you can come up with a much more creative way to continue your thoughts without that word.
I'm really excited to see how you continue with the next chapter :)
Subscribing.

"Becca was so ready to die." ... "NO I'M NOT!" "and then she wasn't." "Good god, thank you!" -fastforward to the end- "I ALREADY SAID I DIDN'T WANT TO DIE! ;-;"

No, but seriously. HOLY SHIT. Sorry for swearing. I found this on comment swap and I wasn't too sure about it, because of the whole suicide thing and generally I don't like reading things that share my name because I apply back to my life and my mistakes. Even more scary is the first line of the summary -- I was there, I felt that way. So I was freaked out to read this. I WISH SOME CUTE ENCHANTING GUY SAVED ME FROM CERTAIN DEATH! No, but I really loved this. I like, I'm guessing, Sasha. Even though he only had but, like, two lines in this chapter, he held so much more depth than actually that. UPDAAAAATE THIS! I WILL CONTINUE READING SO! Well done, my fellow writer. Carry on ^^

The second chapter is just as good as the first, so don't worry yourself. I usually don't continue stories, either; I just write the beginning and the end, but I can never fill in everything in between. This is going very well so far; please update soon (if you're not too busy).

I really like this so far :] Update soon?