Sink or Swim - Comments

@ kissmeslowly.
<3 I love you for noticing!

I know this is an old story but this is so funny to me. Everytime that Ronnie was informed that somebody got in a fight he was always told by some random girl who I'm guessing is Millisant, and then he'd always say "fucking hell" that's just is hilariously funny! Love <3

Max, Chance, you guys are so hot, but evil evil. i love yall.

Honest question, do you seriously hate Mika, or do you just think he makes a good Bad Guy?

Sequel please I love this story I really do so write a sequeal this definately recommended by me

Im like late but like, whatever.;D
I like how Ryan choked on the ring.
I mean like its not funny that he choked. but like i don't know..

You're welcome! I loved everything about this story. You guys were great. Thanks for the updates.

i just started reading this yesterday, it was a really good story, im sad thats its over

Oh, wow! Ronnie went postal on Scott, Michael, and Chris! Hehe, I love how many people accepted their relationship, especially their dad. And the Riley and Millie bit was cute. :) And they finally got it on! Fuck yeah! Loved it. Keep up the good work, you two! Though, if you ask me, do you really need to put them through more shit? I mean, Jacky has been on heroin, almost gone to jail, and gotten raped, and Ronnie was betrayed by Mika and lost his temper for the first time in years. Things are going great for them! I wouldn't be mad if you ended it here.

Oh my god! Jacky! Why did he have to get raped? That's horrible! How could you do that? :(((

Justice has been fucking served, bitches! Mika is such an asshole! Glad you sorted that shit out. I was fucking pissed. This is why I write solo, so no surprises come and grab me by the balls, metaphorically.

What?! What?! What the hell just happened? Mika had better be full of shit! Jacky had better beat the shit out of Mika for trying to fuck shit up with him and Ronnie, or even Ronnie himself beat Mika. Jacky already had a go at him. I'm pissed at Mika! No twists like that shit! Mika should fear for his life too much to try and start shit! Fucking A...

oh wow not expecting that. update soon please

Aww! Ronnie's ticklish! Hehe, Jacky now has a secret weapon. They got caught! Lol. And I hope Derek accepts their relationship! It's suck if he didn't... At least he didn't focus on the fact that they're both guys, so he's not homophobic. Keep up the good work!

Oh my! It's getting steamy! Question, though: if they have sex, who's gonna top? I can't tell who'd be the dominant one. I, personally, like it when Ronnie tops. But it's your decision who tops, if they even have sex. Update soon, loves!

I love how in your Authors note, Jacky coming to his senses is almost killing two people :P
But this story is great, you are both really good authors and the plot is quite interesting

Oh my gosh! I love it! I mean, it sucjks that Jacky almost got arrested, (he didn't stay, so it doesn't count) but he was fucking bad ass. When he broke Chance's ankle, I felt a bit squeamish, but other than that, I liked the fight scene. Mika is an asshole for hitting Jacky from behind, a coward too. But I loved how Ronnie came to save his damsel in distress. Lol. Are there gonna be anymore twists and turns in our heroes' futures? Lol. Update soon, please. ^_^

Oh, my! I think I like the way this story is turning out. Even though Jacky went back to heroin, I like the twists and turns the story is taking. Really like the Max and Craig bit. It's original. Keep up the good work and update ASAP for Kiera! I mean your readers. Haha.

God you guys write the best stories. Cx Never anything but the best! ^_^ This is amazing you guys. Cx

I think I may have already said this, but Jacky is fucking EPIC!!! Hehe, he took down the football team! My fucking hero. Lol. But I can't believe they were after Riley, the loveable kid. Assholes.... You two are doing a great job! I love this story!