A Lifeline From the Start - Comments

  • daisywakefield1

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    and why would he have thought to even go buy a pregnancy test?
    July 26th, 2012 at 07:45pm
  • daisywakefield1

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    so...how exactly did ben get pregnant?
    July 26th, 2012 at 07:42pm
  • ThankYourLuckyStars

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    Oh goodness, I started crying, seriously crying. How could Danny think about that? Danny needs to get his head out of his ass and grow up, I think he's be a great dad if he grave it a chance. DANNY GET YOUR MAN AND YOUR BABY BACK!!!
    July 20th, 2012 at 01:22am
  • Coffeefeend

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    Love it, please contuine :3
    July 5th, 2012 at 08:42pm
  • Chelsea_Smile_6

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    Aaaah don't die :D
    July 1st, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • DeadRoseCircus

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    BRUSNOP. <333333333333333333333333333

    *dies*
    July 1st, 2012 at 06:25pm
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    I hale from comment swap. I must say the first chapter's the use of 'you' confused me quite a bit. Who is/am 'you/I'? I was glad to see it was the only chapter written like that. I suggest changing it personally I find it annoying and pointless. But its your guys' story so do whatever floats your boat! I don't really listen to AA so I'm not familiar with the members but that's just me. It's good but not to my personal preferences. That's okay because plenty of people like it as is I'm sure. Enjoy writing and keep it up :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • SongForAHollyBerry

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    *Gasp* Ben's preggo!!! Love the story so far! :D
    June 13th, 2012 at 12:25pm