Until the End - Comments

One of my favourite short stories on here, ever! Matt is incredibely hot in this and it's so well written. I'm always a little hesitant to read stories that have been catagorized as 'horror' on here mainly due to the fact it always includes unrealistic vampire stories which i'm not too keen on but this is awesome! :)

Wow...this was intense! They were so crazy! but I really like it! Great writing!

This deserves an applause. I was hesitant about reading it. I've read some "horror" one shots, and it makes me want to give them a dictionary. But this... this was fantastic, and wonderfully written. I would LOVE to see this as an a story instead of a one shot, but overall it was amazing. I will DEFINITELY be checking out more of your work. :D

Damn Matt was really hot in this. You know I love me some crazy Matt. Gosh everything about this was just right. The blood and sex together just blew mind mind. For a moment I thought Ness was going to live, but her death only made the story better. Kalina was very bad ass and her sex appeal was insane. All in all this one shot was amazing and I bow down.

this deserves a standing ovation . that was fucking amazing. you have got to be one of my favorite writers on here. your stories are amazing :D

That's got to be the most fucked up one-shot I ever read, but I fucking loved it! I never thought I would be into reading that kind of stuff, but you definitely changed me mind! It was amazing!

Sex, horror, blood, bro that's my kind of story! Great job! Matt and Kalina, by the way pretty name, they're both so twisted, its freaking amazing! I wouldn't want to cross paths with them haha. I swear this should be like a movie or something. God was it great. The ending was awesome especially when she says "Their flesh is burning, you can smell it in the air, Mattie." And then when I read that everything from Nightmare began to play in my head. Until the End, such a great title. This would make such a great full story. Amazing entry, I loved everything, song and image were a great fit to the plot. Thanks for entering hon!

Loved it
Kind of reminded me of atwisted bonnie and clyde story
Very sexy and very dark and twisted
Good job love

Wow. That was just amazing. Those two are wickedly insane, and I loved it. Plus that was some super hot smut as well. ;) Great job! :D

Oh my goodness !
I enjoyed this thoroughly , darling .
Good job :3

WOW! that was amazing! i loved it!